Comments | abvj: Fic - Our Wills Are Fading (Lexie, Mark/Lexie)

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Fic - Our Wills Are Fading (Lexie, Mark/Lexie)

Mar 01, 2009 00:14

Title: Our Wills Are Fading
Summary: How far they’ve come, she muses, mind wandering back to the first night in the bar, with lingering glances and toothy grins when the subtle hint of something had begun to linger.
Rating: pg-15
Author's Notes: 545 words. General series spoilers. All mistakes are mine. These characters, however, are not.

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!writing that i love, pairing: lexie grey/mark sloan, rating: pg-13, fic: grey's anatomy, character: lexie grey, !fic

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lattelady6 March 1 2009, 16:30:59 UTC

Ahhhh that was just lovely.

abvj March 1 2009, 23:10:14 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for reading.

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abvj March 1 2009, 23:10:49 UTC

Thanks for reading! I'm glad it worked for you. Now only if we could get these sorts of scenes on the actual TV show...

rinslet March 1 2009, 23:51:38 UTC

First time commenting, but I love reading your Mark/Lexie fics (and even your Bruce/Selina fics). You got their characterizations pretty spot on so I enjoy reading them. My favorite of yours is Picking up the Pieces.

But anyway, this is a great read. I love the little moment, like Lexie being ticklish... It's sweet. :)

abvj March 2 2009, 02:59:22 UTC

Picking up the Pieces is one of my favorites, too (and I don't know if that makes me sound bitchy or whatever, but I was really proud of it) so I'm glad to hear it's your favorite!

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed this and some of my other stuff!

rinslet March 2 2009, 03:49:51 UTC

Hehe It's a really good fic from Lexie's perspective. I love the way their relationship progressed in the fic, start to finish, and even George's accusations... all were nicely written and not out of character.

My favorite part of Picking up the Pieces was definitely the last part. It's just a silent acknowledgment that they're exclusive and 100% in it together.

I don't review much, and I'm not good at uhh.. commenting about fics, but you get what I'm saying, I hope.

(Sorry XD I ended up commenting on the other fic and not this one :3)

abvj March 2 2009, 21:34:27 UTC

Funny story: I started PUTP (that looks ridiculously funny when abbreviated) with the last section and built the whole story around it!

(Sorry XD I ended up commenting on the other fic and not this one :3)

Not a problem, dear! I'm just glad that you enjoyed it so much.

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dariclone March 2 2009, 01:29:03 UTC

Aww, vwey nice.

abvj March 2 2009, 02:59:35 UTC

thank you!

slybrunette March 2 2009, 02:51:51 UTC

She would be ticklish. Seriously, I love your descriptions in this. It's very...vivid and real, and you're really good at that.

Wonderful work!

(Sidenote: Do you mind terribly if I friend you? There's this minor problem with me switching the letters in your username every time I go to rec you, and also because otherwise I miss your stuff constantly)

abvj March 2 2009, 03:03:56 UTC

Wouldn't she? I mean, she's Lexie Grey, of course she would! Thanks for reading.

And of course I don't mind! I was actually just getting ready to ask the same of you, because I adore your stuff immensely and don't frequent Ga fic often enough.

(Also, have you finished your Christmas fic and I just missed it? I loved that story to death!)

slybrunette March 2 2009, 03:09:48 UTC

Awesome! I never get there either lately, sadly, since I freaking mod it you'd think I would.

I was wondering when someone would catch that. No, it never got finished and I feel silly posting the rest of it, lol.

abvj March 3 2009, 00:33:24 UTC

You mod there? I had absolutely no idea, LOL.

Um. You have to finish it! I'm sure I'm not the only one that wants to know how it ends. And yep, this is me being pushy. Get used to it, lol!

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