Comments | abvj: Fic - Cold Comfort (Sara, Lincoln/Sara) R, 1/1

abvj

Fic - Cold Comfort (Sara, Lincoln/Sara) R, 1/1

Feb 08, 2009 01:57

Title: Cold Comfort
Summary: It's a bar. It's Chicago. They're going nowhere fast. Sara's been here before.
Rating: Hard R
Summary: 430 words. Pre-Series. Definitely AU. Written for pbhiatus_fic 's How do you do? challenge and 2x5's prompt: shadow dances. All mistakes are mine. These characters, however, are not.

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fic: prison break, character: sara tancredi, pairing: sara tancredi/lincoln burrows, !fic, rating: r

Comments 11

danni18 February 9 2009, 23:44:57 UTC

Very creative idea...also sexy and raw. I love how you explored another side of sara where Linc would have definitely fit

abvj February 15 2009, 04:35:44 UTC

I'm glad you liked it. I admit it's a bit out there, but given the people they were once upon a time, it could have totally happened!

Thanks for reading!

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abvj February 15 2009, 04:35:56 UTC

Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it!

happywriter06 February 14 2009, 16:51:32 UTC

I like this. Very plausible. The structure really fits the situation.

abvj February 15 2009, 04:37:03 UTC

Thanks, Simone. Glad it worked for you. I will admit that it was nice to try something new.

sierra_foxx February 17 2009, 00:51:29 UTC

I found your story, eventually!

And man, am I glad I did! Very sexy, blunt and with very vivid imagery. Totally realistic, IMO, and absolutely this could have happened so in my view, not *that* out there, really. This may be "controversial" thinking, lol, but I've often thought Sara in a lot of ways has more in common with Linc than she does with Michael. *g*

Great work!

They fuck like their running away from something

Found one wee typo and thought you might want to know: it should be 'they're' not 'their'. ;)

abvj February 17 2009, 00:59:26 UTC

I agree with you -- I totally think that Sara has a lot more in common with Linc than Michael. In the fic world, I love L/S stories, and I definitely see the appeal/plausibility. I mean you'd think with the people they used to be it's definitely possible. They just kind of fit.

Then again, I'm a M/S shipper at the core, so I of course understand that line of thinking, too.

And thanks for pointing out that typo. I miss my beta and apparently I suck lately lol

Thanks for reading, glad you liked it!

tokenblkgirl February 17 2009, 05:47:31 UTC

Loved this. Very sexy and very well done. Excellent job. :D

abvj February 17 2009, 17:06:55 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading!