Fic - Freefalling Into Nothing (Rebecca) R, 1/1

Aug 20, 2008 02:35


Title: Freefalling Into Nothing
Summary: She tries sometimes, to remember what it's like to be starry eyed, innocent, but she can't. Some people aren't that lucky.
Rating: R
Author's Notes: 4,594 words. Post  Moral Hazard. Mostly Rebecca with slight Justin/Rebecca if you squint hard enough. There are a lot of liberties taken, because we really don' ( Read more... )

!writing that i love, character: rebecca harper, !fic, fic: brothers & sisters

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abvj August 20 2008, 05:11:26 UTC
I'm glad it worked for you! Thanks for reading. I'll be trying to post more stuff soon, but RL and all keeps getting in the way lol

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anonymous August 20 2008, 04:51:13 UTC
i love it plz write more and more

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abvj August 20 2008, 05:11:41 UTC
Thank you, bb!

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falsemurmur August 20 2008, 05:24:27 UTC
Wow, that was amazing. Really heartfelt, very much in an aching sense. But you also provided a few snippets that conveyed that somewhere, somehow there is some healing occurring. Incredibly well-written, introspective, & just awesome peace.

Justin’s you’re just like your mother cuts through her over and over, on constant reply and it hurts more and more each time because maybe it’s the truth, maybe that’s what she’s been trying to outrun this last weekend, her whole life.

You worded that perfectly--it's something so true & you managed to capture Rebecca's dilemma w/Justin's words very well. Thank you for this.

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abvj August 20 2008, 13:03:42 UTC
Thank you for reading! I was a little worried about it because I took so many liberties, but I'm glad it worked so well for you. I love Rebecca, and I don't think we knew nearly enough about her, thus this was born!

Glad you enjoyed it!

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rorylie August 20 2008, 11:46:17 UTC
This is absolutely amazing.

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abvj August 20 2008, 13:04:02 UTC
Thank you, bb! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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anonymous August 20 2008, 17:53:07 UTC
This was really great done!!
I loved it.
Just a little note , 2.17 doesn't exist, 2.16 was the season finale and moral hazard was the fifteenth episode in season two.
Hope you post more!

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abvj August 21 2008, 02:09:26 UTC
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.

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