Comments | abvj: Fic - The Things We Leave Unsaid (SWC, Dominic, RPF) pg, 1/1

abvj

Fic - The Things We Leave Unsaid (SWC, Dominic, RPF) pg, 1/1

Jun 11, 2008 02:01

Title: The Things We Leave Unsaid
Summary: It's funny what a year can do to people. Some things shouldn't be this hard.
Rating: pg
Author's Notes: 750 words. For domfangirl . I don't even know. You asked for Dom/SWC and I kind of gave it to you? I tried to write a super sexy affair fic, but couldn't. All mistakes are mine. Feedback is love.

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fic: rpf, rating: pg, !fic

Comments 13

happywriter06 June 11 2008, 12:50:31 UTC

Sometimes I wonder if I ever went to school because I just blank of what words to use to describe something. *sigh* Anyway, this is lovely. Almost like exhaling. If that makes any sense.

abvj June 11 2008, 20:40:44 UTC

It does and thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed this, I didn't really know what I thought about it when I posted it, so I'm glad you liked it.

paintedflowers June 11 2008, 16:17:14 UTC

Yay! Good to read another fic by you. It was lovely. =)

abvj June 11 2008, 20:41:18 UTC

thanks, bb. How are you by the way? I miss seeing you around! How is everything?

badboy_fangirl June 11 2008, 16:49:03 UTC

Oh, this is so poignant. And here I was thinking you'd just have them making fun of each other or something like that.

This is very touching, and very human, so I really like it. It feels very real.

I really liked his remark about Brooke. *g* Although, I'm curious about them, having been past co-stars and all that. Very interesting.

Thanks, Gin! It was delightful!

abvj June 11 2008, 20:45:56 UTC

I'm curious about them, too. I doubt it is just fun like I said -- kind of just too liberties with that one -- because theres the kids, you know? But, who knows.

Also, I have a question for you. I noticed in one of the rpf you wrote that you said something about him being in AA and I didn't know if that was true, or you had just used it as a character thing, so I did some research but couldn't find anything. Just for my own curiosity, is it true? I figured if anyone would know if would be you, lol. I kind of liked the idea of him and SWC sitting on the beach sipping beers so I decided to include it anyway, lol.

Anyway, thanks for the feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed this.

badboy_fangirl June 11 2008, 20:53:28 UTC

He is in AA, and has been since early 2005. He's been pretty candid in several interviews about his problem. His dad was a drunk too, so he comes by it naturally.

I didn't see a need to criticize that aspect of your fic, but in reality, he wouldn't be drinking. But in reality, we have no business writing this stuff, right? So who cares! *g*

abvj June 11 2008, 21:21:03 UTC

I thought so, but I really, really did like the idea of them sitting on the beach together, like I said lol. But I just liked the idea of the scene. And who knows, they could be drinking some O'Douls or something. ;)

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abvj September 17 2008, 02:09:12 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

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