Fic - your name is the splinter inside me (Lizzie/Darcy) pg, 1/1

[abvj]

Title: your name is the splinter inside me
Summary: Wherein it rains when Lizzie leaves the office, Darcy is there with the save, Lizzie offers an apology of sorts, and the car ride isn't nearly as awkward as that mess in the office. Somewhere, Gigi is grinning proudly at this turn of events.
Rating: pg
Author's Notes: 2,010 words. Set

Comments

[lapiccolina]

I LOVE THIS!

I LOVE EVERYTHING ABOUT IT.

Your internal dialogue is the best. Literally the BEST. I love it when you get into characters head. You really captured Lizzie's voice so well.

I love that you constantly have Lizzie aware of her changing feelings. Just brilliant.

YOU ARE AMAZEBALLS.

[abvj]

THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUU.

What should I write next?

[lapiccolina]

What mood are you in?

Darcy tring to stop Gigi's scheming but tremendously fails when Lizzie falls into his arms? For some reason, I see team GigiFitz somehow getting Darcy and Lizzie literally attached to each other for 2hours, lol.

Or, is there anything Darcy would be bad at that Elizabeth is fantastic at? Sexy tutorial shenanigans?

[abvj]

I didn't not write any of this. I somehow talked myself into wanting a challenge, so I wrote Darcy POV, and hopefully it sounds like Darcy, but let's talk about how Darcy would insist on calling sex "making love" and how much it would embarrass Lizzie, and she would ask him to never, eve say it again and he'd tell her no and explain that with her it could never be just sex. Because that's a think I am going to have to add.

also: I want fic where Lizzie is constantly messing up his hair. just to annoy him.

[nawlins13]

I'm only on episode 14, but couldn't resist reading. I think I'll spend the weekend catching up. I love the modernization of P&P and wish these were full 30 minute episodes. From what I've seen of the episodes, you've nailed Lizzie spot-on. I can't wait to read more.

[abvj]

I wish they were hour long episodes and we could see EVERYTHING. Hurry up & watch, you have so much good stuff ahead of you!

Thank you so much for reading. So glad you liked it.

[empressearwig]

I really do adore this. Ugh, put your faces together already.

[abvj]

Thanks!

[magisterequitum]

This is so great.

I adore so much how you capture Lizzie's thoughts and feelings in this. You've got her down so well.

And Darcyyyyyy.

NOW KISS A LOT.

[abvj]

I wrote fic again yesterday, and there was hardly any kissing. I am so disappointed in myself.

I'm just going to start writing makeouts/sexytimes without any context. Just for the sake of makeouts. That's totally okay, right?

[petragem]

Okay so, I love this, how Gigi is grinning proudly somewhere and Darcy keeps turning the heat up and that they take care of each other. And that the tightness in Lizzie's chest is loosening into something else, and how she fills silences with words because she doesn't like stillness ringing in her ears.

The whole thing is gorgeous, and basically I am thrilled you are writing these two.

[abvj]

Thank you! I am super into these two right now. It is kind of ridiculous. But, more importantly: any chance you'll be giving them a go any time soon???

[petragem]

You know, I haven't tried them yet? But it's not at all out of the question; probably I will take one look at their PB prompts and want to write everything.

[abvj]

DO IT.

Also: I saw that you wrote Zero Dark Thirty fic. I haven't read it yet, but I know I'm going to love it because I've been wanting fic for those two since the minute I walked out of the movie. CANNOT WAIT.