Fic - The Slow Fall (Will/Alicia) pg, 1/1

[abvj]

Title: The Slow Fall
Summary: Inside the hotel room his hands shake. These sorts of things never end well.
Rating: pg
Author's Notes: 573 words. Set directly after the season two finale. All mistakes are mine. These characters, however, are not. Con-crit is both welcome and appreciated.

For badboy_fangirl.

Comments

[badboy_fangirl]

Oh, poor Will. I wish he was unnecessarily fatalistic...but, alas. (She broke both of our hearts, buddy.)

I do love the theme of it all being confused with what he felt back then and the idea that it's always been there, which of course it hasn't, he hasn't been thinking of her every day for all those years, but that's how it feels and that's so real.

Thanks, Ginny. I ♥ it!

[abvj]

Alicia broke everyone's heart, I think. Definitely mangled mine! I keep trying to reconcile it all in my crazy brain, but it still hurts to much. Remember how obsessed with these two I was this time last year? Man, how far I've come!

So glad you enjoyed this, Candy! I had a fun writing it for you. You are awesome and kind and all sorts of wonderful.

[freiheitfuehlen]

This fantastic! Really, your writing is exceptionally good. I love them, both individually and as a couple. Hoping that the new year brings some love for them, too.

Happy New Year!

[abvj]

Thank you! I hope 2012 (and the writers) are kinder to them as well.

[profshallowness]

This conveys the heat and the emotions so well, and made me all Oh, Will.