Fic - I Fell Right Through the Cracks (Tyler, Caroline/Tyler) pg, 1/1

Mar 29, 2011 14:14

Title: I Fell Right Through the Cracks
Summary: Leaving is easy. Or so he thought. Set immediately after 2x14.
Rating:  pg
Author's Notes: 1,931 words. Spoilers for everything up to 2x14. Huge thank-you to the lovely leobrat for the beta. First time with this character, first time with this pairing, so con-crit is both welcome and appreciated. All mistakes ( Read more... )

character: tyler lockwood, fic: the vampire diaries, pairing: caroline forbes/tyler lockwood, rating: pg, !fic

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kitmerlot1213 March 29 2011, 18:42:26 UTC
This was lovely and quite sad at the same time.

While Caroline has Stefan and to a lesser part Damon to help her adjust to being a vampire and she has Elena and Bonnie to lean on, Tyler is utterly alone. Jules is trying too hard to win him over and he doesn't have anyone he can actually trust.

I wonder when he'll return to Mystic Falls and how he'll react to seeing Caroline again?

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abvj March 29 2011, 19:00:03 UTC
I really do hope he comes back. Not just for the C/T aspect of it all, but also because the boy needs somebody he can trust and I don't think that person is Jules. Her motives just don't seem all that genuine, yes? I've accidentally stumbled upon some rumors/spoilers, and I hope they aren't true. There are just too many things left to explore with both him and the Caroline/Tyler relationship. It has so much potential!

Anyway, thank-you for reading. I was a bit nervous with this because A) it was my first time and B) people who write these two tend do it very well, so I'm glad you liked it :)

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abvj March 29 2011, 19:11:29 UTC
YOUR ICON IS SO MUCH PRETTIER THAN MINE.

I might have to snag it.

This has been rumbling around in the back of my brain for months! I had to get it out. Also, I'm hoping it prompts to actually start my five futures Caroline never had fic that I've been planning/writing in my head for just as long.

I love Matt/Caroline, but I like Tyler/Caroline, too. I'm so torn! I hope they bring him back... I do miss their interactions. Actually, I really just miss this show. How much longer until new episodes?

ETA: Yes, Jason Mraz. Why is so damn good?

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abvj March 30 2011, 23:08:08 UTC
I haven't heard that song! I'll have to you-tube it. "Lucky" is one of my favorites. Always makes me sigh happily.

Do you have a paid account? For some reason I think you can only do it if you do. If you do (or even if you don't) if there is a little pencil next to the date stamp (where the X is to delete). You can just click on that.

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leobrat March 29 2011, 22:31:42 UTC
Yay, it's POSTED!

You already know that I love this, but really your Tyler voice is spot-on perfect. And reading through the comments on this page...I think I know what spoilers/speculation you're talking about and I really hope it's not true either. I was talking to someone else about this, and all of these kids (Tyler, Caroline, Matt, and really everyone) has *so* much to explore, individually as characters, and further into their weird, interconnected, complicated relationships that it would be a waste to not go deeper.

Loves it!

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abvj March 30 2011, 23:10:44 UTC
You are too nice to me. You know how nervous I was about this, but it wouldn't exist without your finishing touch. TRUST ME.

I hope he comes back. Funny how I couldn't have cared less last season what happened to him, but now I actually miss him. HOW DOES THIS SHOW DO THAT?

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leobrat March 31 2011, 01:17:12 UTC
Always happy to 'help you' (ha, not that you need 'help', seriously! I just get the bonus of seeing your fics first!)

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abvj March 31 2011, 20:22:50 UTC
It really is the best part of betaing. I'm just waiting for you to get out of your funk so I can return the favor (and in the process you can write me TVD fic!)

Yeah, I'm pushy. So what of it?

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empressearwig March 29 2011, 23:10:41 UTC
Oh, this is so sad, but so great. I wish we knew what Tyler was up to, more of how he felt. I hate that we don't. Excellent job.

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abvj March 30 2011, 23:13:48 UTC
Why does everyone prettier Tyler/Caroline icons than me? I am going to have to rectify that.

I hope Tyler comes back. Both because I want to see what happens between these two but also because I actually miss him. How did that happen? I couldn't have cared less about him last season!

Thanks for reading! Glad you liked it.

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cassiehayes March 30 2011, 01:22:28 UTC
Oh, wow, this is so so good, so spot on, everything from the little details about driving with Jules to Tyler not really what he feels but thinking that it could have very well turned into love. And his family dynamic, the way you showed it here, with all the complications entailed there, and just, the way you strung words together, if that makes any sense, this was just so lovely to read and made my poor shipper heart ache for T/C and dammit, boy needs to come back! Seriously, though, thank you for writing this, it's brilliant.

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abvj March 30 2011, 23:20:56 UTC
HE REALLY DOES NEED TO COME BACK. And soon. I miss him. I've said this a million times, but I really, really do. Last season I didn't care about him one bit, but now I'm waiting anxiously for his return - even though he might not.

Thank-you for reading this. You wrote one of my absolute favorite Caroline fics, so coming from you it means a lot!

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cassiehayes March 30 2011, 23:57:33 UTC
MEEE TOOO. Especially when I read awesome fics like this which remind me of how much I love Tyler and miss him, haha, although Michael Trevino's said that he was back filming for the finale, I think, so I'm excited!

Aw gosh, no problem, I loved it, need more T/C in my life right now, haha. And ahhhhh gosh, wow, well that means a lot to me coming from you! Thank you! Wow, asljdsljds, seriously, thank you. (If it's not weird asking, ha, which fic do you mean? I've written quite a bit for her -blushes- But regardless, still, thank you, that means such a lot, I'm beyond flattered!)

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abvj March 31 2011, 20:21:02 UTC
I lied. It's the Caroline/Damon fic of yours: "Your Innocence is Mine" is the one I was thinking about! I have a sort of obsession with those two. Not that I want them together exactly, but their dynamic is sort of irresistible. And excellent fic for them is so rare because people often forget about who Damon is and who he was to her, so it was a nice find. I never left you a review, but know that I loved it immensely! I've been itching to write them again myself.

Also, your icon? Lovely.

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