Excellent, like the previous one. However, I would like to see more of JC POV, because of the three, he was the only one absent, the one we don't get a glimpse into. Of course, a trilogy, a glimpse into JC, Asher and Anita would be wonderful too. Anita must be wondering time and time again why she doesn't run for the hills. Why she forgave him, while she wouldn't have so shortly ago? Question, questions, and all answered wonderfully by you. Thank you again for writing such great pieces!
I return to Jean-Claude's POV in part three. I decided not to do Anita in this one because I think we get as much as she knows. Thanks again for taking the time to comment. It is much appreciated.
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