Comments | abusing_sarcasm: I Want to Go to the Ball: A Cinderscorpius and Cinderalbus Story (Part Three)

abusing_sarcasm

I Want to Go to the Ball: A Cinderscorpius and Cinderalbus Story (Part Three)

Sep 05, 2008 23:14

I Missed Part One! I Missed Part Two!

Part Three

When he got back to his dorm, Scorpius immediately flopped on his bed, drew the curtains and cast a Silencing charm. He couldn't hold back the huge grin that spread across his face. He and Al had just wanked together. And it was the most amazing, sexy, wonderful thing that had ever happened to him. ( Read more... )

as/s

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snarkyscorp September 6 2008, 05:11:29 UTC

OH.

...OGODWUT.

I mean...you can't just...DO THAT to a person and not... I mean... CHRIST I NEED A COLD SHOWER. D:!

The fluff is totally lost on me but the sex and the physical and emotional build up was just fanfuckingtastic. It made me ache, and if I were a guy right now...well okay either way a cold shower or my right hand will be coming in handy (roflPUN) very, very soon.

tmi. omg. thiswassogood.

moar. pls. #T___T#

abusing_sarcasm September 21 2008, 02:50:32 UTC

I've just realized that I'm a terrible, horrible person who never responded to this comment because I suck, but Candi and I are both ECSTATIC that you enjoyed our sex story. And we just got started working on some more (which is how I came to notice the bad non-comment responding), so there will be... MAKE-OVER PORN coming soon. :D I hope you're not too scared by this development.

Thanks again for reading!

Much love,
C&C

Edited for me not being able to type in all caps without fucking up. :D

wicked_hpnerd September 6 2008, 09:35:38 UTC

Very Very HOTT!!! Also I loved the mix of sweet love and hot sex! Perfection~

abusing_sarcasm September 21 2008, 02:51:46 UTC

maevemist September 6 2008, 10:16:46 UTC

Did I read this word for word? Yes

Did I get horriby annoyed when I need to stop for more than 30 seconds at at time? Yes

Am I now complete unable to form enough words to say how much I liked it and why? Yes I am sorry. I feel bad not being able to come up with some comment worthy of my feelings.

Am I wanting the rest like 10 minutes ago? Hell yes, please don't leave me hanging for to long as I am not fussed on the whole anticipation-of-things-to-come making a story all the more worth while.

abusing_sarcasm September 21 2008, 02:51:55 UTC

okydoky September 6 2008, 17:07:34 UTC

Oooh very hot! I like! ♥

abusing_sarcasm September 21 2008, 02:52:01 UTC

bryoneybrynn September 6 2008, 18:41:46 UTC

You two are absolutely ridiculous and I adore you. Your boys are made entirely of cotton candy. The story is sweet and the smex so very smexy and you're so very kind to share your smutting each other up with the rest of us. I'm pretty sure I know who wrote who, though I expected it to be the opposite but I want to know who's writing Lily?

abusing_sarcasm September 6 2008, 18:45:14 UTC

Wouldn't you like to know? *inquisitive eyebrow*

Nah, since you went to the trouble of reading all that, I'll clue you in. I wrote the Scorpius parts, and Candi wrote Al and Lily. Was that what you were thinking?

And I'm glad you liked it! We certainly had... fun... :p

*smooches*

bryoneybrynn September 6 2008, 18:59:24 UTC

Yes, that is what I was thinking actually. When you said you were trying to make each other cry uncle, I assumed YOU would write Al and Candi Scorp because then you know, she could taunt you with your perfect rock-god Scorp (cause you know he's your favourite) and you could taunt her with her perfect buzzed-hair Al. But then as i was reading, Al just didn't sound like you. But I wasn't 100% sure.

And then about halfway through I noticed the Scorp parts had 's on the end of Scorpius's and the Al parts didn't and that clinched it. lol See - I[m OBSERVANT. Once in a while, anyway.

I thought maybe Candi wrote Lily - she seemed a bit more grrr than your Lily but I wasn't sure.

abusing_sarcasm September 6 2008, 19:05:50 UTC

WOW! You are GOOD. (But I knew that already.) *I* didn't even notice the apostrophes when I went through it... Wily minx.

And yes, Candi's Lily is bitchtastic and I love her. :D

Yeah, you would think that we would have played the other characters, but that's where the role-play comes in. See, she IS Al and I'm Scorpius. The teasing me part comes in when her wily little Al suggests the mutual masturbation thing... Candi is totally evil and she KNEW that would get me all hopped up. It was her revenge for my Scorp teasing her Al with his pretty pretty hair...

Candi and I know each other way too well... It's kind of disturbing... :p

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