fic: Variations on Want and Need

[abriata]

Variations on Want and Need
The Social Network
Mark/Eduardo, Chris/Dustin, OT4
NC17
8,000 words

Mark is a pretty simple person.
Warnings
Mild voyeurism. Mark is a creepy creep?
Notes
For my

Comments

[abriata]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)

[ymorton]

oh my god! THIS WAS SOOOO GOOD. and so hot. and i haven't read OT4 in so long. LMAO, i just wrote "in so hot"... you can see where my mind is.. heheh. UGH, FANTASTIC <33

[abriata]

Thanks!

[abriata]

Thank you! :D

[sistersufragete]

I came for the gangbang, but I was bowed over by the character study. It's amazingly hot, but it's so much more than that; it's about how we become entangled with each other and how mystifying affection and attraction can often be.

Your Mark voice is delightful and sharp. I love how you convey how complicated Mark's thoughts are (and indeed, he is a complicated man) but use such short sentences and show his tunnel vision. The way you portrayed all the relationships and permutations felt right, that mix of patience and annoyance that each had with the other, balanced atop a mountain of understanding.

I'm babbling, but this was so good right from the start that I savored each sentence as I read and just needed to gush at you.

[abriata]

:DDDD

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked the characters, and especially Mark :DDDD

[ohnvm]

MOTHER OF.

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WHY IS THIS SO HOT

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[abriata]

I'm glad you liked it!