fic: The Above Specifications

[abriata]

Title: The Above Specifications
Word Count: 3,800
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Not mine in any way, shape, or form. No harm, no foul.
Notes: Beta by dexwebster. For my kink_bingo square "Electricity". For those of you who hang out here just for AI stuff... I'm sorry?

Comments

[laraneia]

I really liked this. It was an interesting premise and I enjoyed the relationship between Sheppard and Rodney :)

[abriata]

Thank you!

[popkin16]

Interesting device :) I love how Sheppard was good at channeling the energy while Rodney was the conduit :)

[abriata]

Thanks! I'm pretty sure that isn't even close to how real electrical circuits work, because I failed physics. But whatever. :)

[popkin16]

Just claim literary license XD

[helenkacan]

This was a fascinating and unusual interpretation of the prompt ... and isn't that one of the best things that can happen with a challenge.

At the same time, you had me laughing in so many places about Lyle and plugging in Rodney until, suddenly, you shifted gears and the reader was somewhere completely different. Conditioning. The seductive nature of weilding power (and I don't mean electrical, either).

Fascinating story!

[abriata]

Thank you! I'm really glad you picked up on the psychological undertones. :D

[gottalovev]

I love how you did this! it was fascinating to see them work the device and what Rodney could/couldn't do with it by himself and with John.

[abriata]

Thanks!

[anonymous]

That was a great read: unexpected and and interesting... Thank you for sharing!

[abriata]

Thanks for reading!