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Apr 06, 2005 21:05

so i scribbled bits in my shiny new notebook, then haphazardly connected them together, and i have - something.

my first ever mcr fic. hurrah?

(much thanks to jan for beta.)

disarmed )

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chocolategreen April 6 2005, 13:54:06 UTC
holy hell that last line got to me, man. this is such a powerful story...CONTINUE IT OR I SHALL SSSMMMMITE THEE!! :D

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abraxan April 7 2005, 11:53:28 UTC
Glad you liked it! I'd love to continue if an idea hits me, but this was actually supposed to be a one-shot, standalone sort of thing, so...

*is SMITED*

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abraxan April 7 2005, 11:56:45 UTC
Glad you did!

And I just wanted to take this opportunity to tell you that I really like what you've done with Gerard and Mikey in Touch and In The Aeroplane Over The Sea - you've just got such a perfect way with the characterisation, and I love the intensity of the imagery you use. *hearts*

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girl_rotten April 6 2005, 14:43:44 UTC
Well written, intriguing. I'd like to see more.

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abraxan April 7 2005, 11:57:42 UTC
Thank you! And I'd love to be able to write more (if the plot bunnies come running).

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chocolategreen April 7 2005, 15:58:21 UTC
haha....plot bunnies......

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karafain April 6 2005, 16:00:56 UTC
This is really incredible.

I'm so happy I had time to read it this morning, it will surely make my day easier.

Beautiful.

Thank you so much for this, it almost feels like a personal gift.

Thank you.

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abraxan April 7 2005, 11:58:50 UTC
Oh, wow - thank you for taking the time out of your day to read this and leave such a lovely comment - I hope you had a fantastic day.

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abraxan April 7 2005, 12:00:10 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it!

(I thought the last line might be a little too sappy, so I'm super happy that you liked!)

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