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abracah

Whump Challenge 13

Jun 28, 2011 21:47

This week's Challenge was a fic challenge ( Read more... )

fan fic, challenges

Comments 8

anonymous June 29 2011, 02:13:35 UTC

Loved it! Great job. :)

abracah June 29 2011, 02:31:43 UTC

Thanks for reading. Glad you liked it.

gw_libero June 29 2011, 02:26:40 UTC

Great Pocus - I love the story!
Bad singing in the shower, huh?
Thanks for sharing and doing the challenges.

abracah June 29 2011, 02:30:58 UTC

Thanks for reading. LOL at the singing part. He always seems to have some quirky thoughts running through his mind.

You are Welcome for the Challenges. Thank you for playing along with them.

ffergus June 30 2011, 20:55:25 UTC

I felt so uncomfortable while he was furious and frustrating for being sooo incapacitated, and so relieved when he could hear and move again... a very *palpable* feeling. I could actually hear (and enjoy) the marines' radio chatter, Rodney complaining (for once, with a valid motive), Ronon's worries abt John foot injury from Rodney's hard head and all the other surrounding sounds...

Excellent!

I definitely have to catch up with all these challenges, they are truly rewarding

abracah July 1 2011, 01:34:53 UTC

Thanks for reading. I am so glad you enjoyed it. The Challenges have been so much fun to do!!

lauriel01 July 1 2011, 09:56:45 UTC

That was such a sweet fic! I liked your (or John's) thoughts on the difference between being afraid and fear - the difference between reaction and paralysis. Really good job.

abracah July 1 2011, 23:47:13 UTC

I am glad you liked it.

I wish I had gone more in-depth on the Fear thing, but I was worried it would take away from the rest of the story. All brave/hero people say they are afraid. I always think Fear is just a bigger thing.