Crash Landing

[abracah]

Whump Challenge #4 was to rewrite a whump scene and make it whumpier. I chose the end of the Ark because ....come on.....the big thing crashes from outer space onto a planet and he isn't even bumped around. Sheesh

Comments

[thunknwhump]

Very nice whump for The Arc. I was dissapointed with the actual ep beyond words, so thanks for this. :D

[abracah]

I am glad you liked it.

[lorr54]

I much prefer this ending! Well done!

[abracah]

Thank you. I wish we had gotten some sort of whump instead of just a groggy Shep. Oh well. Fanfic helps.

[pisces227]

Yay! the whump we never got. I like your ending much better.

[abracah]

Thanks! It has been bugging me since the ep aired.

[sgafan]

Nice AU for The Ark! :) It never made sense to me that he wasn't in a hospital bed next to Teyla. ;)

[abracah]

Nope it never made sense. So I just reversed it and made her not in a bed at all.

I am glad you liked it. Thanks for reading.

[sgafan]

thanks for writing it! wish I had a chance to write for this challenge, but I just didn't have the time this time around. *pout*

[abracah]

There will be other challenges. I am sure you have already done some writing like this. You could always add a link to the older fic. Or use the challenge as a prompt for a quick story to appease the muse. So many choices for your wonderful writing talent.

[gw_libero]

Oh yeah, this is the RIGHT ending! Love Lorne and Beckett in here - thanks for sharing your story.

[abracah]

Thanks for reading. I am glad you enjoyed.

We did need some Lorne and Beckett.