Break a Promise, Make a Vow

[aboutbunnies]

Title: Break a Promise, Make a Vow
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: Up to I Do
Notes: Stand-alone, written for Challenge #57: Seven Deadly Sins at lostfichallenge. The sin featured is wrath. A very different way I Do could have gone. This is actually a story I've wanted to write for some time, but it took this particular challenge to motivate me to get it out of my head

Comments

[lil_orli]

so heartbreaking when she's telling him to get up and the line she realizes she'll never be freckles again sniff

Beautiful but oh so sad and the power at the end that she will kill them for what they have done

[aboutbunnies]

Thank you :)

[alemyrddin]

oh.
*is speechless*

I wasn't expecting this. At all.
Everything here hurt so much. This line in particular:
Maybe Sawyer had been more of a romantic than she'd thought.

Painful, but beautiful.

[aboutbunnies]

Thank you!

[eponine119]

I really like your writing style! The stories are short, but the pictures you paint are so complete.

I found this part especially striking:

Or maybe people always looked surprised in the last moments before death. She wouldn't know. She hadn't exactly stuck around to photograph Wayne's reaction.

[aboutbunnies]

Thanks so much :)

[naika7]

Amazing! Very sad and heartbreaking, but amazing!

[aboutbunnies]

Thank you :)

[aboutbunnies]

Thanks so much!

I'm actually not planning on continuing this; I'm kind of fond of ambiguous endings, especially for Lost. But I'm glad you enjoyed it!