Re: i don't remember how but i remember blood and rain, han/leiaaboutbunniesMay 11 2011, 01:42:28 UTC
Oh, I just love this. The great tactile imagery, all the sins of his past written out on his skin, Han's quiet waking-up, the acknowledgment of Leia's own scars and the sensuality of their collective imperfections...This is just lovely. Thank you so much for writing it!
Such wonderful hand!porn this is, so very tactile and quiet and calm. Great that it's from real!Jack's POV...I love it. I especially love It was permission, it was an understanding, it was an acceptance... Thanks so much for writing this!
:) it's been such a long time since I last wrote Torchwood fic, but as soon as I saw your prompts and the Jack/real!Jack pairing I found myself unable to resist. I'm so glad you like it!
Lost, Aaron/Clementine, post-apocaplypse, second chance/reunionciaimpalaMay 11 2011, 21:11:07 UTC
Clementine shows up at Aaron's door, rather what's left of his door, dressed in a tattered blue dress, the bottom singed, the top dribbled in bloodstains. It's the same dress she wore when they first met, when she snuck out of her grandmother's house to see the face of the boy who also lost so much to a piece of land and water.
It got too much for him, that she still had a mother and father, a mother who didn't stay in bed all day, who never had to be reminded to brush her hair and eat. And so he just stopped answering the door, while his mother stared at the ceiling and he stared at the floor.
But she's here now, and there's no world outside his door anymore, just corpses and smoke and disaster, it's the island all over again, and this time when she reaches her hand out, he laces their fingers together and pulls her into the unknown with him.
Re: Lost, Aaron/Clementine, post-apocaplypse, second chance/reunionaboutbunniesMay 12 2011, 20:52:45 UTC
This is just beautiful. I love the image of Clementine in a bloodstained blue dress, arriving at his door to take him away from there. The thought that she's done this before...perfect. It's so haunting, too - it's the island all over again... I love this so much. Thank you!
Lost, Kate/Sayid, second chance/reunion aurillyMay 14 2011, 06:09:55 UTC
There wasn’t time to think about how it would all work out, but even if there had been, Kate probably wouldn’t have expected it to go quite like this
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Re: Lost, Kate/Sayid, second chance/reunion aurillyMay 14 2011, 06:10:26 UTC
The days go by, each one the same as the next, but slightly more unraveled. Aaron starts to look at Claire more and more as his mother. Sayid continues to brood. Carole continues to put on a brave face despite tripping over people every minute of the day. Kate feels less and less like she has any place here
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Re: Lost, Kate/Sayid, second chance/reunion aboutbunniesMay 16 2011, 00:27:31 UTC
I just let out a happy sigh, just so you know.
I love everything about this. The world you've crafted for them post-island feels real and wrong, yet certainly how things would have gone. I love the little details like the implied Miles/Richard, Carole's feelings on all these strangers living under her roof, love that you've dealt with Sayid's other-ness. And Kate's slow realization that she doesn't belong only highlights the connection and similarities between her and Sayid.
The last line is perfect. Thank you so much for this!
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It got too much for him, that she still had a mother and father, a mother who didn't stay in bed all day, who never had to be reminded to brush her hair and eat. And so he just stopped answering the door, while his mother stared at the ceiling and he stared at the floor.
But she's here now, and there's no world outside his door anymore, just corpses and smoke and disaster, it's the island all over again, and this time when she reaches her hand out, he laces their fingers together and pulls her into the unknown with him.
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I love everything about this. The world you've crafted for them post-island feels real and wrong, yet certainly how things would have gone. I love the little details like the implied Miles/Richard, Carole's feelings on all these strangers living under her roof, love that you've dealt with Sayid's other-ness. And Kate's slow realization that she doesn't belong only highlights the connection and similarities between her and Sayid.
The last line is perfect. Thank you so much for this!
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