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IRAF Fic 16: Journey [ My Sacrifice-- Creed]

Jun 30, 2007 07:30

Sixteenth part of IRAF.

Title: Journey
Featuring:My Sacrifice-- Creed
Rating: PG13
Release Date: June 29, 2007
Word Count: 2,032
Genre: General
Read Only Version

( Author’s Note )

bleach, iraf, fic, ichiruki, fandom

Comments 53

sodanielle June 30 2007, 16:31:54 UTC

I like the dialogue in this. It all rings true to the characters and you did a good job of using it to pull the story along.

So stop beating yourself up over it 'Kaasan. You're almost done <3

overtoned June 30 2007, 17:06:55 UTC

*headdesk*
You're right... two more to go... two more to go... *burrows into a hole like a mole*

sodanielle June 30 2007, 17:24:05 UTC

go, go ,go!!

spartydragon June 30 2007, 19:21:02 UTC

... but... hasn't Ichigo been stabbed through the chest like a bazillion times and not died from it? *scratches head*

Anyway, good stuff! ^-^

overtoned June 30 2007, 19:24:24 UTC

Ahem.... cue f'ing with canon. I'm just going to say it's the weilder's intent. Like how Rukia's sword and give her powers while Zaraki's kills him? The meaning of sword penetration hm...

XD

I had like... this conversation with all my bleach friends for like... two weeks. In the end I just thought... F this... I was bound to slaughter canon some time...

*is very sorry* :x

But i'm glad you still liked it. Even though it was... *pokes it* dead... T-T

overtoned June 30 2007, 19:27:48 UTC

Er... and please excuse my horrible reply [typoes galore?].... if it's incoherent... I'll edit it and repost. *waddles away*

spartydragon June 30 2007, 22:39:46 UTC

I didn't even notice the typos. XD

I thought like, right after I posted that, that maybe it had more to do with Ichigo's intent. Like, whenever he was stabbed before he was On A Mission and was thus too stubborn to die, but this time he was cool with it. X)

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seleneharker July 1 2007, 03:28:35 UTC

*sniffles* I think this has been my favorite one so far.

The whole stabbing to make him a regular soul may sound a little odd considering the times Ichigo has had a sword shoved through his body, but it makes sense since that is exactly how he became a shinigami. The intention-is-what-matters explanation works for me.

overtoned July 1 2007, 17:27:34 UTC

*is grateful for your acceptance* T^T

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overtoned July 1 2007, 17:25:00 UTC

:O

It's a heart... and it's red and big. :DD

wicked_liz July 2 2007, 06:38:33 UTC

*sob* I don't even like Creed, but it was pretty, and not overwhelmingly sad. And this will be ending soon? (in denial)

Also minor typo: “I’m still going stay here in Soul Society.” I'm guessing u meant "going to stay here"

overtoned July 2 2007, 07:00:41 UTC

sdk;jflks. THANKS OMG TYPO.

Creed is kinda pretty .:<

[<3 I'm really glad you can still find goodness in this. But yeah, IRAF is 2 fics away from ending. :( Possibly tomorrow. But there'll be more things and projects. *has other stuff planned. F'seriously. :D]