That Particular Day. John's POV

[abene74]

Title: That Particular Day, Chapter 2
Author: abene74
Rating: PG
Pairing: John/Paul
Warning: Sweet feelings, angsyt and emotional
Disclaimer: .I am creating this completely from my J/P obsessed mind. It never happened , as far as I know
Timeline: 1961
Word Count: Under a 2000 words, I'm sure
Summary: Paul and John are working on a new tune, when John

Comments

[beagle_agent]

Finally they both confessed! Great chapter, very well written. Will there be more?

Astrid

[abene74]

Yes indeedy. And thankyou!! I just had to go a little further then Paul's POV. Wanted them to get some confession in there, so to open it up to get to the next level in the next chapter. ;)

[mollybeakers]

YAY! Great John POV, and a bonus in conveying Paul's anxiety through that POV. It was like experiencing John's 'read' of what Paul was feeling. Very cool!

Paul's turn, now. :)

[abene74]

Why thankyou Miss. Beakers!! I loved your comment, 'conveying Paul's anxiety through John's POV'. And the cool thing, with them being so intuned with each other, it makes it possible and realistic to be able to have a pretty accurate read on what the other is feeling, without it drifting from a POV. I just love these two

[free_asaword]

lskfjsdlkfjdsfjls Salivating with AWWWWWWW.
More, please. :)

[abene74]

Ohhh JOY!!! I'm glad you liked it, and want to read more! I rather enjoyed writing Johns perspective myself

[abene74]

Thankyouuu. I am writing chapter 3 Paul's POV right now!!

[wanderlust1122]

Yeah! You had continued this I am so happy.All we need is early John& Paul...

I Loved the read the same story in John's POV.Good idea:D