Buffy knew there was something not quite right about this, but whenever she tried to concentrate on it, the notion flitted away like a hummingbird, or a butterfly, or something equally quick and flittery. It was almost as if she was forgetting something important, something about herself, maybe, but nobody else seemed to notice anything and
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Also, hot as hell. ;)
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Also, glad you liked ;)
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There's a lot of that pretending not to notice going around. Before and after. The tantalizing little flutter on the edge of her consciousness was quite evocative, and I love how it explodes into technicolor awareness with the right trigger. And oh, what a trigger!
Excellent job! Superstar!Spuffy is a wondrous thing...
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That something was going on here, something bigger than both of them but part of them, too. Whatever it was had allowed this to happen even though it shouldn’t, in a million years, have occurred.
The spell is over but the consequences live on.
Very enjoyable reading.
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I can just imagine what the rest of season 4 might be like with this little plot twist. Thank you for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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