Son of a bitch!! I love this fic! Everything about it is just sooo Hermione. I love the way you use vocabulary to go that extra mile and you have a way of mixing the cerebral with the pop culture, like this part:
His hair was mussed carelessly and his clothes a tad wrinkled, but there was an air of unflappability that surrounded him. As if he had not a care in the world.
As if he was one cool cat, Daddy O.
It was the greatest enigma about him, and Hermione could never seem to figure it out.
I love that each scene takes place in a different place in Paris and it shows the evolution between them.
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His hair was mussed carelessly and his clothes a tad wrinkled, but there was an air of unflappability that surrounded him. As if he had not a care in the world.
As if he was one cool cat, Daddy O.
It was the greatest enigma about him, and Hermione could never seem to figure it out.
I love that each scene takes place in a different place in Paris and it shows the evolution between them.
GOOD WORK!!! *shaking and crying* lolz.
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