Comments | aatash: Fic prologue, maybe...?

aatash

Fic prologue, maybe...?

Oct 26, 2008 11:15

Fic bunny from ningen_demonai. Sorta. And I'm also watching a certain gameplay now and then courtesy of stridingsky. I... honestly don't think I do this type of genre much justice but uh.

( A Maou crossover, Naruse focused. (Tell me this is a bad idea.) )

fic, maou'zoku

Comments 19

This is cool!! mint_and_mocha October 26 2008, 04:18:27 UTC

It's well written and leaves me curious as to what's really going on.

I like the way you write Naruse, being (mostly) collected and analytical even during a nightmare.

Also, what is this a cross over with?

Re: This is cool!! aatash October 27 2008, 01:19:24 UTC

♥!!

Is it awful that I'm looking forward to getting to the point where he really loses all that cool and logic and just breaks down?

You already know but, Fatal Frame 3. o/

Re: This is cool!! mint_and_mocha October 27 2008, 03:12:53 UTC

No it's not. Part of the amazing-ness of Maou was seeing Naruse's cool, determined, resolve slowly crack and fall away revealing his inner sadness, anger, and insecurities.

KEEP GOING <3 ningen_demonai October 26 2008, 04:27:26 UTC

... Holy shit. D:

ilu for thiiis <3 aatash October 27 2008, 01:22:35 UTC

Bloody axe! D: And it'll only get weirder.

Hahah, Ilu for making this awesome fic! <3 ningen_demonai October 27 2008, 01:25:17 UTC

I look forward to more creepy craziness! :Db

xanderave October 26 2008, 06:59:49 UTC

Hmmm shouldn't he be Tomoo still if Hideo hadn't die?

And while reading this, my mind keeps going back to the recent VS episode during the pipe catch when Nino mentioned something about the 空気 and Ohchan suddenly piped up and said "今日はくもり..." plus "いつも晴れたん..." along that line - yes 天気. Ohchan isn't MKY, he is a clueless AIRhead that we all love and adore. Everyone had "???" over their heads haha. What's interesting is one of the guests is Gekidan Hitori (yup, serizawa's older bro).

Ohchan's mind is totally on his fishing or anything fishing-related like the weather and he goes all out fishing and gets tanned! Why is he so speshul?

aatash October 27 2008, 02:41:20 UTC

D-Does it read like Hideo's still alive? |D;

That boy is just in his own wooooorld. *lol*

dvampyrlestat October 26 2008, 07:37:47 UTC

I love reading tormented characters. Tormented Naruse included.

This is a prologue????? *is hopeful*

aatash October 27 2008, 01:58:01 UTC

H-He's going to be a lot more warped after this. *sheepish*

Yes! Let's see how long I can keep this up. *l-lol*

mjlights October 26 2008, 10:34:59 UTC

this makes me miss MAOU so much more.... I really liked how it was written... it was entertaining.. are you planning to have more of these? I look forward t reading them...

aatash October 27 2008, 01:58:47 UTC

Yes. o/ With my attention span, I don't know how long it'll last but I'll try my best!

And thanks for reading~