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Yes. Me posting again. Since I joined the UsagiMamoru community a while back (I think it has been over a year now, but oh well...) I haven't posted anything here yet on the 100 themes challenge. So, finally here is the first theme. More will come.
Title: Blue Eyes
Theme: 5
Words: 863
Anime: Sailor Moon
Pairing: Usagi/Mamoru
Status: Complete
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That afternoon while they are lying in the meadow, Mamoru leaning on the tree and Usagi with her head in his lap, she doesn't even try to love him more than she hates him or herself because it doesn't bring her pleasure anymore - nor love, nor hate - like it used to, in the beginning, and this is the end, just not yet. It will be, because it's not like it used to be, when spring was just spring and autumn was just an autumn; when they both meant to her life and love, loneliness and regret for something that was, wasn't and won't be.
I love that paragraph. There's something desperate about them, kind of like sand slipping through their fingers.
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Yup. That's what I tried to show. Just like you said - love slipping through their fingers. Great metaphor.
And I too really miss watching Sailor Moon. Though, every once in a while I check a few episodes on You-Tube just to giggle and be happy.
And I'm glad you liked the story. Thanks.
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