Comments | aabass89: Sweet Potato Couple fic : Precious Things

aabass89

Sweet Potato Couple fic : Precious Things

Nov 09, 2010 10:38

Fandom        : WGM
Pairing          : Sweet Potato Couple (with cameos from Hyoyeon -because I adore her- and CNBLUE)
Disclaimer    : none of the characters belongs to me.
Rating          : PG
Prompt         :  IT’S NOT OK
Summary     : Sometimes SeoHyun just needs a frown, and Hyoyeon decided to take matters into her own hand.

( Seo JuHyun, what do I have to do with you? )

fandom : seohwa, sweet potato couple, pairing : yonghwa/seohyun, fanfic

Comments 15

♥♥♥ forevermyworld November 9 2010, 19:35:08 UTC

first and foremost thank you!

now onto the fic, i liked how you nailed seohyun's personality with her need to meticulously plan and control everything, also her habit of thinking she's right/knows what's best for her. and then your characterization of yonghwa. amazing. just how i'd picture him taking the news of the breakup, he didn't blow up, he just seethed and left. and then you just tied everything so nicely together with the cameos from snsd&cn.blue. & i love angst, so this is perfect. very well done, amazing!

&why did you delete the R fic?! >:0! ahaha.

Re: ♥♥♥ aabass89 November 9 2010, 21:35:31 UTC

thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I wasn't too sure how I should approach the prompt at first to be honest. it could be anything, you know, from overblown fluff to gigantic size angst (which is why I like the prompt in the first place :))
and yes, that's how I pictured YH taking a break up. I don't think he's the type to indulge in self pity.. (that's the bias in me speaking btw).

as for the R fic.. ehem... maybe I'll ressurect it again in the future :)

goguma1207 November 10 2010, 00:37:32 UTC

AHH I love I love! Can you write one from Yonghwa's POV as well? Haha this is so perfect!

Thanks for sharing!

aabass89 November 10 2010, 03:53:37 UTC

it's actually a tempting idea, writing in YH's POV.
I don't know, maybe I'll do this one day. it will be fun, I think :)

bollywoodrecord November 10 2010, 00:53:07 UTC

AW!!! If there was a sequel to this, I would totally be all over it... AW!!! It was so cute!! And reallys sad too... But still so cute!!! Thank you so much!!!

aabass89 November 10 2010, 04:00:15 UTC

thank you for reading! writing a sequel is always very hard for me though... I'd rather write a two shots or three shots..

ryunho November 10 2010, 03:06:22 UTC

This was amazing. I found it well-written, well thought out, and perfectly balanced.

You made it come to life; I've always tried to picture what would happen when Seohyun allowed her (for lack of better words) rigidity come in the way of their relationship.

And the last part made me feel super happy. Sigh, haven't read a fanfic this good for a long time (:

Thank you.

aabass89 November 10 2010, 04:15:16 UTC

aww, thank you so much!!!

it's the same for me, I've been mulling over this idea since the first few episodes of WGM. she seems to be a person who would never let her guard down, who would always want to be fully in control of herself. and he's so easy going, so cheerful, it would be fun to let this opposing personalities crash.

haeanna November 10 2010, 04:32:20 UTC

this is so LOVE.
Seohyun's portrayal in your story is so spot on.
you said it takes forever to fin the story then I say it's so worth it. perfectly written !

thank you. ;-)

aabass89 November 10 2010, 15:17:59 UTC

aww thank you. I know, it takes forever for this story to get written.. *shame*. RL is killing me at the mo, so the story was in my head for weeks (yuck!) before I could force myself to really spare some time and had it written. *sigh*