Hanadan fic : Foolish Game (8/9)

[aabass89]

Well, I did say in the last post that the story will wrap up in this chapter.  guess what, I was wrong T_T.  I need one more chapter to finish.  It just felt too rushed when I tried to put everything in one go.  so, enjoy.....

Pairing         : Yuki/Soujiro
Rating          : PG
Title             : Foolish game (8/9)
Word count  : 2,002
Disclaimer   :

Comments

[catslove17]

I'm loving the Australian references, though I think the Japanese have embraced vegimite whole heartedly there. Even more than I have. I mean personally it creeps me out.

I'm not going to lie, I would've loved to see more action and tension, but I like (and am impressed) by how soujiro got over himself. Wouldn't the world be a better place if all guys were like him??

AND THE LAST BIT!!

It's the best bit, and you incorporated Makino in the best way. BFF all the way. There's so much to say about it, but because my vocabulary is truly shit, I am speachless.

[aabass89]

'I think the Japanese have embraced vegimite whole heartedly there'
Eww really???
It took me about two years before touching the stuff. although now it's strangely addictive. you know what, vegemite sandwich is good with beer/wine.. hahahaaaa... see how unaustralian I am?

and soujiro's mild reaction?
here's my thought : the thing about him is the possesiveness. the fact that he hated the most is not about Yuki having sex per say, but the fact that it was Tsukasa who got the chance to console her from him(albeit in drunken manner that lead to the act). so it's m ore of a jealous act toward Tsukasa. and I think he hated Tsukasa for that.

I think also, it will be different situation had Soujiro been a different kind of person. I mean, he's a playboy and proud of it. he's been with every girl in the city. I really don't think he has the moral high ground to judge, as Tsukasa pointed it out to him in the last chapter.

this has become an essay...

[xcry]

You are amazing.

I just LOVE the beginning. That's the best part, about telling lies and truths. I love games like that...Truth or Dare...?

And of course, the making love part was just as sweet.

I'm going to be very sad when this series ends. There's not a lot of good Sou/Yuki stuff out there...

[aabass89]

Ooohh I totally love that kind of game. it's kind of like poker, trying to guess whether you're telling the truth or not...
I know right. there are so many SoEul story, but SoYuki is not that popular, I guess...
only diehard fans like me loves reading SoYuki pairing T_T

[redsn0wflakes]

I'm sorry I haven't commented at all much on your wonderful Yuki/Soujiro fic here. I tend to get a little lazy sometimes...not to say it's not awesome-sauce!

It's amazing how accurately you've written them, even I can see that when I haven't watched HYD yet. ><; There's just so much angst and yet it's so sweet at the same time. Kind of like their relationship.

I don't think I know how else to describe the pure awesome-ness of this, because it won't do it any justice. Just...I love you for writing it! xD

[aabass89]

Awwww. thank you. *palmface*
I love it that you even read this, considering you haven't even watched the drama ^_^
but honestly, I really have to finish this, because I want to write another pairing.. this story has eaten my brain.. :D