OK, next chapter is half written. I'll put it up when I come back in 3 weeks.
in the mean time... enjoy your summer!!!!!
Pairing : Yuki/Soujiro
Rating : PG
Title : Foolish game (5/?)
Word count : 2,079
Disclaimer : only messing around with characters. Original chars obviously belong to the mangaka
Summary : Yuki
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I like the way this one ended though. You have a knack for ending things just the right way.
Firstly I love that Yuki has a life. I mean seriously, she couldn't hang off Shoujiro for her whole life, she was a little too dependent for my taste, but now she can speak english and has a life. And a bloody damn good one.
She's 10X sexier now.
Please keep your stories coming ohkay? You have such great plot ideas, and I enjoy reading them so much.
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which is why I'm taking a break from it now!!!! I decided to stick to jdrama for a while because I want to write those cute and cuddly story. not angsty and emo riden like this one.
I can't even write atadan although I really wanted to. gaaahhh..
but I just have to finish this story. I sorta fell in love with them. am i weird?
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"will you marry me?"
‘Have you ever thought about us at all?’
It hurts.
But I do like the Nana character, don't tell me you based her off on Nana from Nana the movie? lol.
Her new BFF. Man, I wish you at least have Yuki keep in touch with Makino (Unless you did and I missed that part, sorry).
Other than that, I hope you have a safe trip home soon and like...post the rest of this awesomely beautiful fic. <33
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anyway, wait for the next chapter. I'm still tweaking a bit but it'll be posted soon. I think I still need a couple more chapters to finish the story...
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