Hanadan fic : Foolish Game (5/?)

[aabass89]

OK, next chapter is half written.  I'll put it up when I come back in 3 weeks.
in the mean time... enjoy your summer!!!!!

Pairing         : Yuki/Soujiro
Rating          : PG
Title             : Foolish game (5/?)
Word count  : 2,079
Disclaimer   : only messing around with characters. Original chars obviously belong to the mangaka
Summary    : Yuki

Comments

[catslove17]

Such a shift from the way you ended the last chapter. hehe, just like a drama in my opinion.

I like the way this one ended though. You have a knack for ending things just the right way.

Firstly I love that Yuki has a life. I mean seriously, she couldn't hang off Shoujiro for her whole life, she was a little too dependent for my taste, but now she can speak english and has a life. And a bloody damn good one.

She's 10X sexier now.

Please keep your stories coming ohkay? You have such great plot ideas, and I enjoy reading them so much.

[aabass89]

I think I watched too much kdrama to come up with the story.
which is why I'm taking a break from it now!!!! I decided to stick to jdrama for a while because I want to write those cute and cuddly story. not angsty and emo riden like this one.
I can't even write atadan although I really wanted to. gaaahhh..
but I just have to finish this story. I sorta fell in love with them. am i weird?

[xcry]

I KNEW IT. I knew you were going to end it that way. With Soujiroh finally finding her (one way or another at a place) and then asking the hardest question in the world,

"will you marry me?"

‘Have you ever thought about us at all?’

It hurts.

But I do like the Nana character, don't tell me you based her off on Nana from Nana the movie? lol.

Her new BFF. Man, I wish you at least have Yuki keep in touch with Makino (Unless you did and I missed that part, sorry).

Other than that, I hope you have a safe trip home soon and like...post the rest of this awesomely beautiful fic. <33

[aabass89]

I actually based Nana from this manga I read sooooooooo many years ago. the character called Nana and she had a twin called Yuki... I think.... she was bubbly, cheerful, and looked a bit ordinary whereas Yuki was reserved, calm, and beautiful. I can't recall the title of the series, and I have since lost all 7 books of them :(

anyway, wait for the next chapter. I'm still tweaking a bit but it'll be posted soon. I think I still need a couple more chapters to finish the story...