Hanadan fic : Foolish Game (3/?)

[aabass89]

hi... sorry for not updating for quite a while.  here's for chunny.

Pairing        : Yuki/Soujiro
Rating         : PG
Title            : Foolish game (3/?)
Word count : 2,227
Disclaimer  : only messing around with characters. Original chars obviously belong to the mangaka
Summary   : Yuki had been missing from everyone’s life for quite some time.

Comments

[saihikaru]

i have to say, i am enjoyn this fic more and more. i like the way you write how the characters feel and their thoughts. i would agree that Soujiro is so dense, he would need his best friend to show him the way. just wonderin, does Akira know something that everyone else doesn't？like where she was and why she left? keep it up can't wait for the nxt chapter!

Cheers

[aabass89]

I'm glad you like it! and no, Akira has nothing to do with Yuki's disappearance, and he has no idea on her whereabout. but he might develop a hunch in the next chapter :D

[redsn0wflakes]

Ah, the bitterness of regret...I love the way you led us into Soujiro's mind...everything becomes that much more raw.

[aabass89]

Soujiro deserves everything that happened to him, that's all I'm gonna say. although the heart break goes both ways.

[anonymous]

i seldom comment on stories but i just want to say that i really like your story. your characterisation of soujirou is spot-on, i think. i'm curious to know about the event that caused yuki's disappearance (the provebial straw that finally broke the camel's back?). update soon!!!

[aabass89]

thank you! glad that you enjoy the story so far and that you like my characterization of Soujiro in all his flaws :). I'm not very good at updating though... but here's hoping that I don't have to wait weeks for my muse to appear XD

[idajj]

oh!!!
finallyyyy!
i commented over at Lovers Unparallel!
hehehe!
Love ittt!

As per usual...I want moree!

[aabass89]

yes finally, I got over my laziness and post something :D
this story is getting longer than what was planned *a bit annoyed*

[idajj]

haha!
well, it sounds lovely to me! ^_^
more work for you, yes but..more lovelies for me!
haha! :)

[catslove17]

Yeah I'm a bitch I know. I'm sorry for neglecting you.

I feel as if I've been neglecting a lot of people. But I hope you will forgive me all the same.

In the Boys Over Flowers, I must admit they portray Akira as a back up Ga Eul. You know, just in case Kim Bum is feeling frisky and homosexual after Ga Euk breaks his heart. So I'm glad I saw some bonding here. It gives one hope ..... (Because Korean Akira is hot ... but don't tell anyone I said that)

Hats off to the swearing. I love it when people swear in fics. It makes it much more realistic and raw.

Nice use of canon, because god only knows I disregard canon, and hate people who don't stick to it. As always, lovely language (so so so much better than before) and POSSESSION. Hotness .... (and now I'm sounding like homer simpson.)

Also, Shoujiro is stupid. Thanks for showing it again! I do love stupid guys waking up and realising exactly what they've done wrong, and trying hard to make it all right again.

[aabass89]

acckk.. I'm neglecting a lot of people too.. :)

you know what, everytime I watch BOF, my perverted brain kept telling me Ga Eul wouldn't mind a threesome. those three are so much loser than the Hanadan trio. and yeah, Korean Akira is HOT! Imagine them in a setting like Y Tu Mama Tambien (have you watched it? You have to! I promise you'll be head over heel in love with this movie). HOTNESS!

and the swearing.. I love writing them because I CAN swear. I mean, writing Nobuta kinda have restriction in its use of language. Kurosaki could work, but he's so emo at time (you know I like to follow my canon).

[aabass89]

and I meant closer, not loser. hahaaa