Seasonal Seduction - 2/4

[a_v_y]

Title: Seasonal Seduction
Chapter title: In Winter - it was a coat
Art: Draco's Winter Seduction by karlen4
Author: a_v_y
Genre: Romance
Words: 1100 words
Rating: K
Warnings: none
Betaed?: yep :DD
Summary: Wintertime is cold but Harry doesn’t feel it.
Disclaimer: Characters and the world of Harry Potter are property of J.K. Rowling.
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Comments

[fresica]

I like this quite a bit. Splitting the chapters up by season is a very unique idea.

One thing, though:
"HHHHHHHhjdjwij is, I'm assuming, a rather large typo? ^^;

I can't wait to see more!

[a_v_y]

I'm so sorry but I seriously don't know what you're talking about.
Oh gosh, I guess there was some kind of error, I look for it - man I wish it would just for oooonce work out right. everytime there's something wrong with the things I post -.- why alwys me T-T
sorry, you probably didn't want to hear that, so just thank you a looot for your comment! ^-^ though I have to admit, splitting the story up by season wasn't my idea but was part of the challenge for which I wrote it. I explained that in the first chapter ^^

[fresica]

It could just be a coding error. That happens sometimes, sadly. I noticed that something similar happens when I copy/paste things for upload at ff.net. It looks like it's fixed now, at any rate.

[a_v_y]

I see. that's annoying >.> but most important, it's gone xD
thanks for commenting! :D

[akiko88]

I love it! I definitely like the detail of this fic.

You could use after every paragraph a white space (I really don't know how you call it in English :)), it makes your fic more readable. This isn't me criticizing, your fic is absolute lovely. It's just a tip. :D

[a_v_y]

thanks a lot for your comment.
*pouts* that's not fair. one says delete the blank spaces (I'm not english therefore I don't how it's called either ^^") and you say add them. meanies x-X
but if you look at my first chapter you see that I have them there xD

[akiko88]

*giggles* I'm sorry that we are giving you trouble. I didn't mean to! I just think that it reads better on the internet when you do the spaces. So sorry about that!

Oh, really you did that with the first chapter, I only read his one.

[a_v_y]

yes, I did. actually I do it most of the time, because I think it's more compfortable xP
it was coincident that this time they went missing ^^
see for yourself, that's the link:
http://a-v-y.livejournal.com/5994.html#cutid1
*sublte self pimping* ;D

[enchanted_jae]

I love your descriptions of Draco from Harry's pov. Quite lovely.

[thrnbrooke]

Oh I soooo soooo sooooo need more!

[westkitsune]

Oooh~ I love how much Harry is teasing Draco xD

Moar please ^^