Oh you. Why do your writings affect me as such? Sigh.
Kame shuts his eyes tightly, reels a step back, tries to block out the softness in Jin’s voice, the darkened eyes, like Jin is reaching into his ribcage and slowly, gently digging out his heart. I love the imagery.
Just. I've mentioned it before.. The way you write kind of caresses all the emotions, never too bare nor too much. I think that's the quality in your writing that I love so much. And the pacing is brilliant for me. ♥
Aw, but I'm glad my writing is able to affect you in some way :)♥ thank you so much for the quote-back and the wonderful comment! It always makes me smile to hear somebody's enjoying my writing :))
this is so amazing ♥ it makes my heart warm during the cold winter days :D the ending was so heartbreaking and so beautiful thank you so much for writing and sharing this! ♥
Thank you so much! Haha, yes, happy holidays to you :)♥ warmth is good. I'm glad you liked the ending; it was the part I was unsure about the most. Thanks again :D
This was so lovely, Jen. ♥ I especially loved the images of Kame playing the piano a;lskdlgas So gorgeous. *____* It makes me miss playing the piano, lol. The story was really sweet and I loved the scene when Jin sits down on the floor as Kame plays and then says he's sorry and they both just break down and ;laksnd;glasd ;_____; Really very wonderful. ♥
This comment is much more lame than you deserve, but forgive me as I've only slept for four hours and idk what I'm saying anymore. Just know that I really, really enjoyed this. ♥ I love your Akame. :3
Thank you so much, Riha :)))♥ sjklf;a I just kept telling myself "imagine how you'd feel if you couldn't play piano" and, I. yeah. god I love that instrument ): I'm so, so glad you liked that scene ajskld;fa I was so worried about it T_T
It's fine, bb ♥ get some sleeeeep. Thanks again :'D always flattered to get a comment from you, you brilliant writer ♥
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Kame shuts his eyes tightly, reels a step back, tries to block out the softness in Jin’s voice, the darkened eyes, like Jin is reaching into his ribcage and slowly, gently digging out his heart.
I love the imagery.
Just. I've mentioned it before.. The way you write kind of caresses all the emotions, never too bare nor too much. I think that's the quality in your writing that I love so much. And the pacing is brilliant for me. ♥
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i love it.. :)
guess i have nothng more to say since its all been said.. :)
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it makes my heart warm during the cold winter days :D
the ending was so heartbreaking and so beautiful
thank you so much for writing and sharing this! ♥
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Thank you!
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This comment is much more lame than you deserve, but forgive me as I've only slept for four hours and idk what I'm saying anymore. Just know that I really, really enjoyed this. ♥ I love your Akame. :3
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It's fine, bb ♥ get some sleeeeep. Thanks again :'D always flattered to get a comment from you, you brilliant writer ♥
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