(one-shot) park bench

Nov 02, 2009 19:20

Title: Park Bench
Author: fingeredheart
Pairing: JongKey
Genre: Friendship, hinted romance, angst, AU
Rating: PG
Disclaimer(s): Nothing's mine.
Summary: There's a bench they both go to.
A/N: I started this last night, and finished it tonight, so I'm sorry if the second half sucks compared to the first half because I'm feeling very drained today. :| this is the ( Read more... )

pairing: jongkey, #one-shot

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fingeredheart November 14 2009, 19:27:05 UTC
Aw, thank you! And thanks for the reassurance, haha. Sorry for the terribly late reply! JongKey is ♥

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r_hr_maniac November 3 2009, 16:12:16 UTC
that...that was just too beautiful ♥ I mean, the idea just screams clishé and too much fluff, but it is not. And that's the deal. ♥

“So today,” Kibum begins, and pauses to let Jonghyun glance over at him. “I met this guy.” I love this sentence. It kind of wraps up all their conversations they had through the bench. And Jongyhun's tell me about it just starts of an the new way of talking to each other.

also...I don't know you, but I think your Jongyhun bias shows :D :D can't blame you

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fingeredheart November 14 2009, 19:28:29 UTC
afdjk; thank you so much! I tend to be a walking cliché, but I'm glad you thought it wasn't overboard.

LOL oh man, I guess it does show, doesn't it. Maybe I'll try to keep that in mind next time; I'd hate to have all my writing be so biased to one character. Thanks again for the comment :) sorry for the terribly late reply!

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tuulessakulkija November 3 2009, 19:48:36 UTC
.. oh god
i just loved every bit of this
so beautiful. how the other visits the bench at night and the other at day, and then finally they meet..
and the hearts. pure love.
thanks for this, and keep on writing!

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fingeredheart November 14 2009, 19:28:49 UTC
Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it. :) Sorry for the late reply!

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xxqod November 3 2009, 20:10:14 UTC
This is so romantic!
I was smiling throughout the whole story!
I love your writing style <3 ~!

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fingeredheart November 14 2009, 19:29:18 UTC
Haha, thank you! Glad to hear it. Sorry for the late reply! (also, matching icons, much. ♥)

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fingeredheart November 14 2009, 19:30:39 UTC
Theaaa. :'D sorry for such a late reply ._. but I'm glad you liked it! I am definitely not up to par with anything Nicholas Sparks (omg, A Walk to Remember ajskldfa *___*) but thank you lots. ♥ oh, pft. I doubt that :| thanks for the comment, bb!

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