Bloodsport.

Aug 15, 2010 14:19

Just a little midday ficlet.

Set in S4 during the Pink Posse days.
Warning: Some violent imagery.
WC: 460
unbeta'd

fuck the copyright Disclaimer: don't own em && they aren't paying the rent.  strictly an obsession.

Bloodsport )

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fancypantsdylan August 15 2010, 18:25:05 UTC
You know I want to have some sympathy for Justin but I just can't, Daphne and Brian tried to tell him that Cody was Physco and still he went onwards, Justin has no one to blame but himself.

You've captured this period of the Pink Posse and Justin brilliantly.

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a_life_defiant August 15 2010, 18:31:25 UTC
Thank you so much! Sometimes you just let yourself be led somewhere you know you shouldn't, he needed to learn that no one was going to stop him from following blindly.

The whole gun/chris thing was what was the 'lightbulb' moment I believe.

And I wanted to touch on that - Justin's lost. He knows it's his fault and that's what make it worse. ya know?

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a_life_defiant August 15 2010, 18:32:49 UTC
Aww! thanks muchly!

I kinda knew you'd like it. you like weird dark shit. just one of the many reasons me ♥ you :D

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a_life_defiant August 15 2010, 18:48:41 UTC
*grins stupidly while floating in same boat*

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ireland22 August 15 2010, 18:53:02 UTC
this was amazing you sort of make us want to sympathize and hate him all at the same time

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a_life_defiant August 15 2010, 19:02:34 UTC
Thank you. I guess cause I understand why he let it happen, but at the same time I don't.

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rifleman_s August 15 2010, 18:59:32 UTC
"...but unsure how to get back."

You've captured the darkness of that period very well. It was heartbreaking seeing Justin being drawn into such a depraved world when everthing about him (yes, even his upbringing) told him not to get involved - but it all just snowballed out of control. And you've captured all that, along with Justin's desire to get out.

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a_life_defiant August 15 2010, 19:06:06 UTC
Thank you so much.

Yes, I hated how dark he got then. I know it helped him to grow...but at certain points it seemed like Sunshine didn't exist anymore - though I suppose that was probably the desired effect. It's hard to watch. You feel disgusted, but at the same time you're cheering for him to get it together.

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tv_fan_2008 August 16 2010, 09:22:52 UTC
Wow. This was a very powerfull piece. You did a great job of showing just how lost he was during that time. Well done!!

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a_life_defiant August 16 2010, 16:35:27 UTC
Thank you.

I always had a bit of difficulty w/the fact that they more so focused on him being angry and not much else. This was my way of getting over that lol

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