thanx :D i quit writing for so long because my guy hated it.. just started to write again recently and i wanted to practice first until i got the knack of it again.. i post in badpoetry sometimes but i'm afraid of submitting it somewhere else.. :D
this made me think of those neutron stars. two forces stuck together and dying out slowly, suspended in the dark where the enviable light of still living stars is visible from every direction.
aside from that, your poems always have such a nice visual flow to carry the words. like a tide.
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aside from that, your poems always have such a nice visual flow to carry the words. like a tide.
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that statement is beautiful.. u speak like poetry.. i like that..
thanx by the way :D
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i love the end
cancel out my life
it means nothing now
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