The Exile, Part II, Chapter VII: The Air in Camelot

[a_g_doren]

Title: The Exile

Chapter: The Air in Camelot
Author: AGDoren
Rating: Teen
Genre: Romance-Fantasy, cannon until 4x9, AU on all events after 4x9
Spoilers: up to season 4x9, Lancelot du' Lac
Characters/Pairings: Sir Elyan, Sir Gwaine, King Arthur, Sir Leon, Sir Percival, OC as needed, pairing Arthur and Gwen
Summary:  Chapter 7 brings us back to Camelot.

Comments

[viomisehunt]

You so perfectly caught the conflicted feelings of family when a love one commits an act that appears on the surface beyond forgiveness. However, if there is no forgiveness, or at least an attempt understanding and opportinity for redemption, then compassion and justice are just frauds. Good Chapter. I felt like crying for Elyan.

[a_g_doren]

Aww thanks viomise. Even though Gwen didn't actually cheat I wanted to look a little at how adultery affects more than just the couple. Writing this really made me wish Merlin wasn't a family show or had more episodes or both because there were so many missed opportunities with the situation they created.

Has the Master's Daughter been updated??