[one-shot] Arashi; Fading away

Dec 09, 2011 06:07

Fandom: Arashi
Title: Fading away
Pairings: Sakurai Sho x Matsumoto Jun, Ninomiya Kazunari x Sakurai Sho (friendship), mentions of Ninomiya Kazunari x Ohno Satoshi
Genre: AU, angst (you’ve been warned), romance
Rating: PG
Summary: An unrequited love story, as seen from a rear-view mirror.
Notes: I can't believe I'm writing this much lately despite being ( Read more... )

f: arashi, p: shoneen/sakumiya, ex: one-shot, g: romance, lan: english, g: angst, g: au, p: sakumoto

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a_fantasia December 9 2011, 16:13:28 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad the idea worked well ^^

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ylunio December 9 2011, 17:00:42 UTC
I love this.. :)
The way you wrote it, from Nino's point of you is really interesting. I love Nino's character and his interaction with the others. And the little hint of Ohmiya is just lovely.
By the way, even if it's a sad story I've enjoyed the reading :)

Thank you for writing and sharing :)

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ayu_t January 3 2012, 01:30:20 UTC
Sorry for replying this late D:

Thank you! I just wanted to experiment changing my style and trying to tell the story from an outside point of view ^^ I'm happy you liked the result ♥

You're very welcome :D

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astrangerenters December 10 2011, 03:28:10 UTC
I thought having this outsider Nino point of view was interesting, and I really liked the friendship dynamic Nino developed with Sho.

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ayu_t January 3 2012, 01:52:40 UTC
Thank you!

Really, I'm so proud you like this. I was so excited when I saw you left a comment on my fic I didn't know how to reply without sounding like a crazy fan, although that's exactly what I am XD

I just LOVE your Sakumoto fics. I love them to the point I've almost cried in the train on my way to college so many times because of the feelings. You are an amazingly good writer, and I love you for that. I only haven't written any comment for you yet because I'm too shy and I'm still trying to find the words to describe how much I like your work.

There, I said it *breathes*

Seriously, it made me very happy to see your comment ♥

Sorry for the lateness and, above all, the lengthiness of my reply XD But I really needed you to know you're part of my inspiration ^^

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astrangerenters January 3 2012, 02:58:46 UTC
Thank you very much <3

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gomushroom December 10 2011, 10:43:29 UTC
Same as above because your choice of POV was nicely done! <3

I haven't read fic in a long time and this was a great start. XDD

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ayu_t January 3 2012, 01:57:55 UTC
Sorry for the late reply

Thank you so much! ♥ I'm happy you enjoyed it :) I hope you read more of my fics in the future ^^

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ayu_t January 3 2012, 02:02:27 UTC
Such a late reply, sorry! ):

Thank you!

Yes, realistic is what it felt like while I was writing. There were some parts in which I really felt sorry about them, and it was hard, but at the same time I thought this story needed to be told like this. I'm happy you liked it ^^

You're very welcome ♥

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