The Long Road Home, Ch. 13

[a_boleyn1230]

We’re drawing near the conclusion - two chapters left after this. At this point I’m struggling between wanting to get it done, worrying about it dragging, and worrying about it being rushed. *headdesk*

Comments

[canon_balls]

YAY!!! Having sex with Morgana finally cause Arthur to grow a set and stand up to his father! That was sooooo gratifying. If only this happened on the show.....

Yeah, good point, she's Arthur's responsibility now, so Uther can shove it. If he annuls the wedding, I will let the dragon eat him.

Don't worry, it's not dragging. You are leaving us waiting to see what happens next -- great job!

And Morgana's a biter......doesn't surprise me. LOL!

[a_boleyn1230]

Thank you, monkey butt, I'm glad you enjoyed the kink factor I threw in. Frankly, I couldn't resist biting Arthur either. :D I think you bring up an excellent point - in order for Arthur to become a true, noble king, he needs to have sex with Morgana first. *nods*

[neda16]

Bo this was another great chapter! I'm so glad Arthur finally stood up to his father! It's about time! And he's right, Morgana is now his wife and responsibility - not Uther's. So take that Uther :P And of course Uther overreacts to their marriage, as expected. *sigh* He'll never learn. But I like how Arthur said he's happier now than he's ever been because he married Morgana, even though he's getting kicked out of the castle. That's true love ♥ Its so nice to see ArMor as blissful newlyweds :D

Oh and I wanted to say that you do an amazing job with the Arthur/Merlin banter! Its hilarious and I can actually imagine them saying those things :D And poor Merlin always has to do the dirty work haha. And the fic is definitely not dragging! I will be so sad when it ends :(

[a_boleyn1230]

Thank you, Neda! :D The Arthur/Merlin relationship should be central to the show so I really wanted to include that in the fic. I love it when they argue like an old married couple. :P

Its so nice to see ArMor as blissful newlyweds

That's how they will be in Avalon. *sighs* We have to remember that. <3

[flybeautiful]

Hee hee, Uther throwing a bitch fit....How cute. Someone obviously couldn't find their teddy bear the night before.

In all seriousness though,
“It suits me quite nicely, Wife,” he growled, moving to deepen the kiss.
this gave me chills, the good kind, cause that is hot. Those two would end up having about a million babies cause they just can't keep their hands off each other.

And also, Arthur! I love how he can be totally cool and calm about whatever magical creature is wrecking havoc on Camelot ('oh cool, I'll just go stab at it a little bit while looking dashingly handsome, no biggy') but when it comes to Morgana that possessive bit of him kicks in. Loves it!

[a_boleyn1230]

Someone obviously couldn't find their teddy bear the night before.

LOL I <3 your comments!

Those two would end up having about a million babies cause they just can't keep their hands off each other.

That's why I felt it didn't need porn content, because their chemistry is so intense that it speaks more than words ever could. Any scene they have together has major eyesex.

And yes, it's ridiculous how Arthur looks so handsome no matter how dirty/wounded/stressed he is. Mmm. <3

[a_boleyn1230]

Thank you! I struggled some with Arthur's characterization in this chapter, because we've really only seen him so furious with his father (briefly) in "Sins of the Father". So I was trying to visualize the scene in my head first. I think for Morgana, he would do anything! ;)

[luckytohaveher]

I read this last night... well it was early morning. I woke up to take my antibiotics and kinda checked to see if it was updated. There was much glee!

Oh Morgana is totally a bitter but I bet Arthur doesn't mind. Also it kinda sounds like the flood from the stream didn't cover up those sounds as well as Arthur thought.

I <3 for Arthur and Merlin's bickering and the awesome Gwen/Morgana friendship moments. You can truly see OT4 here. I WANT THIS IN THE ACTUAL SHOW AGAIN.

Okay, I hope they flee or something if Uther keeps threatening with the annulment thing. And I love that you mentioned Geoffrey. Hee.

I can't wait for next chapter!!! *squee*

[a_boleyn1230]

HAI! *glomps*

I woke up to take my antibiotics and kinda checked to see if it was updated.

Aww! <3 Well I hope the update made you feel slightly better, lol. I thought of you in the grocery store yesterday because, in front of me in line, was this woman with a baby, and the baby had creepy Hans Matheson eyes. And he was staring at me! *flails*

I've always suspected that Morgana is kinky in the sack. Arthur is probably all reserved at first but she'll loosen him up.

I WANT THIS IN THE ACTUAL SHOW AGAIN

I know, right? It's as though S1 and S2 were two totally different shows. I WANT S1 BACK! *hurls self on floor, kicking and screaming*