Room with a View

Dec 01, 2013 18:55

Title: Room with a View
Author: a_biting_smile
Rating: NC-17
Characters/Pairing: Jensen/Danneel
Word Count: ~1,200
Warnings/Spoilers/kinks: enema, plug, first time
Author's Note: I know diddly about this kink but I do like the idea of Jensen's belly and Danneel being in charge of it, so that was really the appeal. This was another fill for November's spnkink_meme: "Danneel ( Read more... )

danneel, nc-17, fanfic, rpf, jensen, enema, kinkmeme

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snickfic December 2 2013, 02:19:59 UTC
Oh, this was you! For the record, I was the OP. I reiterate that this came out super hot. FYI. :)

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a_biting_smile December 2 2013, 02:29:05 UTC
Oh, yay! It makes me doubly happy that the OP is someone I LIKE (and deserves good things.) So I'm glad you think this is a Good Thing. I really know NOTHING about the process except what I could glean from an hour on the internet. So it may not be exactly accurate but, well, close enough.

Thanks, snick!

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snickfic April 6 2019, 15:28:47 UTC
I would just like to say, six years later, that I just reread this and it is STILL DELIGHTFUL. So full of tenderness and vulnerability, and Jensen's sweet round belly. <3

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a_biting_smile April 8 2019, 15:17:14 UTC
*snuggles with* And I never get tired of your lovely words! <3 Hope all is well with you, punkin!

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amberdreams December 2 2013, 17:58:01 UTC
Ok, 3rd time trying to leave a comment!!!

I wouldn't normally read something about enemas (I mean, essentially they involve shit and I just don't find that sexy! LOL). But thankfully you stopped before the - ahem - venting process, and I can safely say - this was sweet and sexy.

I do love a fic that conveys the warmth and love between the boys and their wives, and the undoubted attraction too, and this does both.

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a_biting_smile December 2 2013, 18:55:52 UTC
I'm not into enemas either, to be honest, and I SURE as hell wasn't gonna explore the, um, exit process (not that it isn't perfectly okay for some! Just not me.) I just really like Jensen's delightful belly (as you well know!) and in my mind's eye, Danneel is sassy and clever and the slightest bit manipulative. And she loves her husband thoroughly. So that was kinda my spin on it!

I SO appreciate it when a reader tackles a topic that isn't their 'thing'. So thanks bunches, amb. YOU'RE AWESOME. (I'll drop you a line about girl!Sam later today, after errands...)

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cassiopeia7 December 2 2013, 18:36:56 UTC
Oh, gosh, I almost didn't read this the first time around, because enemas are so not my thing. But I'm glad I read this. Should've trusted the author. ;) Like the J2 one, I'm loving the relationships that you build in addition to the sex. (It may be a kink of my own, but a fic has to show that the characters really care for each other, or the sex part just doesn't work for me. And this worked -- even the kink I ordinarily would've skipped.) You done good, woman. Carry on!

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a_biting_smile December 2 2013, 19:02:13 UTC
You guys are the BEST FRIENDS EVER to read a fic that isn't in your wheelhouse (not exactly mine either, to be honest! Talk about a challenge.)

For me, the act itself isn't ever the thing; it's what goes on between to the two people, and I don't mean the physical stuff. The physical stuff can be any number of iddy kinks, but it's the interplay between the personalities that sells it or not. I just picked a prompt that was relatively easy to research with characters that interested me! S'how I roll. Yo. :D

*huuuugs*

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rosereddawn December 3 2013, 22:54:53 UTC
Aw, I love this kind of schmoopy, gentle kink so much. Hot and adorable!

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a_biting_smile December 6 2013, 17:46:06 UTC
Aw, thanks! I'm kinda surprised it worked but really happy it did. :D And that some folks, who had to wander out of their comfort zone to read, did so and left nice comments. I like you guys!

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hunenka November 14 2015, 13:44:41 UTC
Like other commenters above me, I'm not really into fics involving enemas, but I do love Jensen/Danneel fics, so I had to give this a try. And I'm so glad I did...

I love how you depicted the intimacy and trust between Jensen and Danneel, the love that's absolutely clear in every line of the story. And you actually managed to convince me that enema!fics can be hot!

And that last line!

Loved this.

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a_biting_smile November 14 2015, 16:54:40 UTC
Oh, wow, thank you! I mean, truly, it's the highest praise when you can get someone to enjoy something they never thought they would. Even just a little! Totally made my day. :D (It's not my thing either, but I don't know, I like bellies? Hee!)

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