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a2zmom

Open On Sunday: Plastic

Feb 08, 2012 18:00

Spike ( Read more... )

fic: buffy/spike, fic, drabble, open on sunday drabble, fic: spike

Comments 21

evil_little_dog February 8 2012, 23:44:25 UTC

Oooo. At first I thought he was with Dru, then the Buffybot, but it hurts when the last line hits.

a2zmom February 10 2012, 00:21:37 UTC

I am all about the pain.

evil_little_dog February 10 2012, 03:58:44 UTC

Pain iz Gud.

landrews February 8 2012, 23:56:02 UTC

Damn. You should be completely satisfied. This drabble rocks hard.

a2zmom February 10 2012, 00:22:09 UTC

Thank you so much! Coming from you, that means a lot.

helygen February 8 2012, 23:58:24 UTC

Wow! Just ... wow!

Your mastery over the drabble art-form is awe-inspiring.

a2zmom February 10 2012, 00:22:29 UTC

Now I'm blushing.

seraphcelene February 9 2012, 00:49:41 UTC

I LOVE this. Hot! The language is gorgeous and very tight. I also love the Spike's longing in this. You've done so much in such a tiny space.

I especially love this line.

And when she finally did trail her fingers down his chest it was love and lust and heat, so much heat, and he broke and was remade, over and over.

a2zmom February 10 2012, 00:25:34 UTC

I really love that line also. At first I was going in much more physical, literal direction but I was very unhappy with that. And then it hit - it's all about the emotion. It's something I need to remember for the future.

cornerofmadness February 9 2012, 02:37:58 UTC

I love it.

a2zmom February 10 2012, 00:25:57 UTC

Thank you so, so much.