[Fic - Yullen Week - Day 5] Bitter Cookies

Jan 18, 2011 17:09

Title: Bitter Cookies
Author: a1y-puff
Fandom: D. Gray-Man
Pairing: DUH. Yullen Week anyone? :/
Genre: Humor, fluff aaannnd a little bit of angst.
Summary: Finding out Kanda suck at taking care of the sick is unsurprising. Finding out Kanda actually has a few mother-hen tendencies, on the other hand…
Word Count:~5900
Warning: AU. Possible OOC-ness.
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yuu kanda, days, d.gray-man, allen walker, lenalee, dgm, kanda/allen, yullen week, fanfiction

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kurosaki9 January 18 2011, 16:02:18 UTC
awww, Kanda's playing nurse. hehehe~

Poor Allen. Getting sick and effectively throwing up over the tiled floor and literally passing out. Feel sorry for him but not that much since he had Kanda there taking care of him the whole day.

I adore Lenalee. That pic will probably the womna's wallpaper or something cuz i know that she won't delete it.

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a1y_puff January 21 2011, 11:09:06 UTC
Wahahah yes probably Lena will use it as a wallpaper and coo whenever she looks at it XD

Thanks for reading, glad you liked it <3

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harmony283 January 18 2011, 18:45:18 UTC
I think I already spammed you enough with all the parts that I liked in this...BUT I'LL DO IT AGAIN.

First off, though, I know how Allen feels (as I'm sure I've said before...what with me being stuck in the bathroom throwing my guts out one morning before class xD; ) but at least he gets better -w-

and now for the spam:

“Don’t fucking nuzzle my-tch. Big baby.”

Said ‘big baby’ didn’t even bother to counter that, because his head was still pounding. He needed it to stop. Maybe if he could just fall asleep… <-that just because of the 'Big Baby' comment

Taking in the sight, Lenalee went, “Aaaawwwww…” Then, before neither of the boys had the time to react, she fished out her cell phone, and-click.

Silence.

“…what the fuck, woman?”

<--THAT LAST LINE AS YOU KNOW HAS ME CRACKING UP EVERY DAMN TIME I READ IT.

Though he was still kind of lethargic, Allen was sure he could muster the few steps to get to his own bed, but for some reason, Kanda wasn’t kicking him out yet, and Allen was too lazy to move if he didn’t have to. Maybe, Kanda ( ... )

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a1y_puff January 22 2011, 15:25:04 UTC
((and I kept forgetting to reply GUH!))

butbut yeah heeeeee~<3333 thank so muuuuch for your double reviews! And lemme hug you because I couldn't have done this without your help too <333 *huuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuugs*

Also about Kanda being men-- well. We all know being mean like that is part of Kanda's charm, yeah? :p

Annnd yeah i want to work on the next installment buuuut yeah. My muse ;A;
*has been meaning to discuss with you but haven't gotten the chance* XD

butbubtbut yeah <3<3<3

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harmony283 January 22 2011, 20:34:00 UTC
((S'fine s'fine XD))

You're very very welcommmmmmme *is huuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuugged*

EHeheh yup <3 Kanda you meanie <333

*pokes your muse* :/ and yeah I didn't even talk to you yesterdday XD;; *thinks she fell asleep before you even got online* and now your internet's acting up so...I guess wait till you get to the office? XD;;

<33333333333333333333333333

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hakasha January 18 2011, 18:50:03 UTC
oh wow. i feel tremendously better after reading that! especially Lena's visit and the last part, oho, it feels like some definite evolution is going on there! can't wait to see what they do on they 6. *_*

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hakasha January 18 2011, 18:51:41 UTC
*day 6, not "they 6". sorry, I'm braindead. OTL

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a1y_puff January 22 2011, 15:56:57 UTC
Heeee I'm glad tohave made you fele better <333
annnd uhh.. yeah. Day 6.. >.>;;;
XDDD <333

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raburabu_sama January 18 2011, 20:55:41 UTC
Yays a new part for the story ^-^ I was starting to think I had managed to miss this, or something like that~ But glad you got over busyness to write some too, this really made my night!
Even if poor Allen got so sick :< But Kanda taking care of him was very cute in a violent way. But the ending, I especially liked that *-* What tasty tension~

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a1y_puff January 22 2011, 17:03:20 UTC
eheheh... sorri I'm so slow in updating ^^;;; buuuut work is >.<;;;
anyway` thanks for reading and commenting! I'm glad you liked it <3

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raburabu_sama January 24 2011, 08:47:12 UTC
No worries :D You really spoiled us rotten with the beginning of the story, seriously I've next no never seen as quick updates as that x3
I know how work can really eat up all the time, it's horrible D: So I understand very well, and I still think you've been a prompt updater :D
I hope work gets better for you ^-^

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greenarms January 18 2011, 23:16:40 UTC
I just have finished read this, so I'm full of emotions. It's.. It's just amazing. True yullen, I think. Anyway, I love how you write about their relationship. Not too slow and not too fast, just ideal.
Thank you very much for this beautiful story. *ш*

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a1y_puff January 22 2011, 21:08:42 UTC
Hee~ thank you so much for your nice comment <3333
I'm glad you enjoyed this story so far ^___________^

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greenarms January 24 2011, 15:52:25 UTC
No problems *-*

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