[Fic - TezuFuji] Romantic (for demonessryu)

[a1y_puff]

Title: ROMANTIC
Author: a1y_puff
Fandom: Prince of Tennis
Pairing: Tezuka/Fuji
Genre: Angst/Romance
Rating: R (*gasps* I write something above PG-13!)
Word count: 6098
Summary: "I’m thinking of you who I miss, and yet I can’t put it into words. It’s heart-breakingly painful but I want to be close to you, still want you by my side." (Romantic - Rie Fu)

Comments

[paranoid_fridge]

^___________^ [Your lime is gooo~ooood]

Uhm, yes. Wonderful(ly angsty) until Tezuka's wife came along and made life difficult [hell, all would have been easier if they'd just gotten together during school time, but well, I guess the plot wouldn't have worked then ^_~]

Beautiful writing, by the way, and I liked Tezuka's "reasoning" towards the end (though well, the path to hell...).

Am looking forward to a sequel very much. ^^ Whether there's more drama or a happy ending - I'll take both ^____^

[a1y_puff]

^__________^ [Thanks soo much, glad that you think so :D]

Haha, well, isn't life meant to be difficult? :P *smacked*
Thanks so much for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed this fic ^_____^

As for the sequel, it surel would have more drama. I'm not telling how it would end though :p

[white_ashes07]

Oh, that's so sad. T_T

Tezuka's wedding ring was a surprising yet heartbreaking twist. I didn't see that one coming! I was so in denial that I actually wanted to think that instead of Tezuka being married, he's only wearing a ring so that women would stop hounding him and now that he has Fuji, they'll live happily ever after... together. But then it turned out that he really had a wife. I feel so sorry for Fuji, and for Tezuka too.

I'll be waiting for that sequel then!

[a1y_puff]

Awww... I'm sorry to have broken your heart *snugs*
and so sorry that Tezuka had to have a wife. Blame my muse >.>
But I think happily ever after just doesnt exist in real life, ne? *deliberately ignoring that this is a fanficton*

Much thanks for reading~! Don't wait for the sequel, it won't be anytime soon, but I WILL write it ^___^

[lafuego]

Ne, ne, I did mention when we were chatting that the way Fuji found out about Tezuka's married state was still haunting me long after I finished beta-ing this, right? I thought that was a bloody brilliant way to throw in a twist to the story.

I think I ran out of superlatives in praising this angst-fest piece of yours when I e-mailed you back my beta-ed version (I still think my beta work wasn't able to do this story of yours justice, and as I was reading through it, I still spotted about 3 things I should have caught and corrected-- but somehow missed). Love, love, LOVE this piece! Yeah, I think a sequel that ends in a "happily ever after" would be wonderful, but then again, I, of all people, understand that some stories just call for sniffy endings.

You are amazing, love! And this is amazing work! Looking forward to more!

[a1y_puff]

Aww, thank you, Rei-san! That part kinda wrote itself. I was originally planning on Tezuka telling Fuji about his marital status, but then the Fuji in this fic found out first before I could make Tezuka tell him XD;
I'm really glad it worked :D

And it's okay. This fic is long and I didn't really give you long enough time to beta, so missing 3 things isn't a big deal (tho if you could tell me the mistakes so maybe I can fix it? :3)

And thaaaanks sooo much for all the praises, you're really good for my ego *snugs*
I'm glad you enjoyed this angst-fest fic (darn, it felt really good writing this much of angsts) XD

Please bear with me, as I might still be bothering you with my future works! *glomps*

[tacuma811]

I'm a bit late with reading and reviewing, but I was gone this weekend ^_^"
I love your fic! It's sad, but there is so much love! Really beautiful. A sequel would be awesome (because I don't want Fuji to marry Atobe either!!) Take your time to write it XD

I liked the lime! It killed you, but it was worth it! Good job! It's was not graphic (which makes it more beautiful). The way you write about it makes it more like 'love' than like 'lust' and that fits perfectly in your story. Well done!

I'll answer your email today!

[a1y_puff]

Hehe, 'sokay! Were you on a vacation? :3

And thanks sooo much! I'm glad you liked it! This fic was a pain to write, yet I had fun too! Writing angst feels reeeally good XD

Glad you liked the lime too! I didn't want to make it graphic coz it might have ruined the atmosphere if I did. And I aimed to show more of their love rather than lust, so I'm glad it works ^^

Thanks much for reading! A sequel will be coming (not) soon, coz we MUST prevent Fuji from marrying Atobe *nods* XD

And I'm goin out today so I'll answer your email tomorrow ne? :D

[tacuma811]

Yes, I was on a vacation, with my whole family, because it was my parents 30th anniversary.

I can understand it was difficult to write, but it was really good!!!
You did, really good job on the lime! Now you can write more fics with higher ratings than PG-13 XD

Yay for the sequel! (anything to keep Fuji away from Atobe XD)

Alright! I''ll wait for it!

[iceshade]

so this is supposed to be the more coherent review. hunh. ::fails:: XD
when you got to the part about the wedding band, my brain went "NO. RAWR." and then tried to come up with any other excuse why tezuka could be wearing a ring. I phail'd. (so much so that my grammar suffered too).
the lime was great, so don't worry about it. hey, I would love to see more higher rated stuff from you. ::hugs::
I hope you get you're writting mood back soon, becuase I can't wait to read more from you. :3 so would now be a bad time to ask about TSM? hehehe...

[a1y_puff]

Nyahahaha... I want to shout at Tezuka for being married too XD

Thanks! Glad you liked the lime ^^
And well... I have no plan for now, but I might write more lime (or maybe lemon, if I could work it out XD) in the future ^^

Anyway thanks for reading and reviewing in ffn too! :D

About TSM, I DO want to update. I'll try to finish the half-written next chappie soon ^^;