[Drabble - TeFu] Never Land

Dec 10, 2008 15:56

Title: Never Land
Author: a1y_puff
Fandom: Prince of Tennis
Pairing: Tezuka/Fuji
Prompt: #17. Blossom
Genre: Fluff, fluff, fluff!
Word Count: 439
Rating: G
Summary: Fuji thought what he’s feeling to Tezuka was like being in a Never Land.
Warnings: unbetaed, random, done in one sitting, epic failure of WRITER’S BLOCK.
Disclaimer: PoT belongs to Konomi- ( Read more... )

challenge, fanfiction, 50scenes, b'day, tezukafuji

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lafuego December 10 2008, 10:05:15 UTC
Aaaahhh~! Tezuka and his golden silences. It's a good thing that Fuji had gotten adept at translating those silences.

But this drabble has an interesting concept. The comparison is apt, though you had explained it with just a tiny bit more detail, played with the comparison a bit more, I think it would have added to the awesomeness... or maybe I'm just a sucker for all things TeFu and wish that this drabble had been longer. XP

But meh! Short and sweet does it for me too. I liked this!!! ^_^

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a1y_puff December 10 2008, 10:52:33 UTC
LoL yea, with Tezuka is soooo fond of silence, Fuji had learned how to translate them XDD

Ahaha, thank you~ I'm glad you liked the concept ^^;;
I think my brain is still weird and my muse needs more poking >.<

anyway I'm glad you like this! *glomps*

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elysis December 10 2008, 10:08:26 UTC
This is not very fluffy, but I like it this way. I can still feel the peaceful atmosphere, despite it's short ^^.

"Fuji didn’t know if it was the cold snow melting on his bare hands that urged him to hold Tezuka’s hand, but he did it before he knew it." This was so typical of Fuji and Tezuka was so sweet and considerate in his own way again ^^.

Btw, I'm just a little bit confused about the never land thing. In the beginning I thought it's about his feelings towards Tezuka. But when I finished reading this, I guess it's about love.

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a1y_puff December 10 2008, 10:55:13 UTC
Thanks! I also love the not-overly fluffy things <3
and I'm glad you got the peaceful atmosphere ^______^

heheh~ I know, they're awesome just like that neee <333

And hahah yeah Naver Land = Fuji's feelings to Tezuka = LOVE! so they're the same anyways XDD

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mitsu_syusuke December 10 2008, 12:36:33 UTC
aww..
under Tezuka's infamous silent and expressionless mask hides a warm heart! ans only Fuji can see the those emotions in his eyes..
that was so sweet...

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a1y_puff December 11 2008, 01:53:43 UTC
Of course, Tezuka's warmth is something that Fuji reserves to himself XD
Thanks for reading :D

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eliza_natsuko December 10 2008, 14:02:17 UTC
this s a result of writer's block? NO WAY NYA!!
this is way too good for a writer's block. perhaps you should read one of my writer's block fics *dies*

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a1y_puff December 11 2008, 01:54:57 UTC
Aaawww, thanks so muuuch! *hugs*

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white_ashes07 December 10 2008, 14:56:32 UTC
I think that they were really in character in this fic. The subtle messages sent to each other, the comfortable silence, the unspoken agreements... everything is just so them. You did a good job in writing this!

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a1y_puff December 11 2008, 01:57:41 UTC
Wheee! thanks so much! I'm glad that u think they're very IC! <3

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