[OriFic] Dream Scape

Jun 26, 2014 05:41

Title: Dream Scape
Rating: G
Word Count: 890
Day/Theme: 9/Songs
Summary: He doesn't know why he's here, or how long he has been here. It feels like forever. Like a dream.
A/N: Ninth submission of Celeng 10 Hari Kreatif Bersama Tante-Tante Fujo. I hope I am early enough to not lose! Anyways not beta-read, kind of inspired by "Dream Scape" by ( Read more... )

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dark_kana June 27 2014, 15:12:56 UTC
I like how you made him believe it was a dream. And then end it with the words 'I am back'. I really like that! ^^

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isumi_ilde July 4 2014, 05:36:32 UTC
FUCKING IMAGERIES

The description of the dream scape was definitely my favorite. I like the constant atmosphere of beauty in the first part, especially when it feels like he was chasing his memories. That was really nicely written. <3

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nherizu July 12 2014, 11:36:17 UTC
Aaaaaawieeeeee so sweeeeet of you <3
Thank youuuu :">

Anyway, that was so beautiful, the descriptions and everything! I also loved the atmosphere, and how in the end it was his mum who kinda made him go back to where he belonged.

PS. This reminded me a lot of my old, ooooooold fic. Kinda similar but yours was much MUCH better. I want to burn mine. .____.

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