[Fanfiction] (Not) A Beautiful Mess

[a1y_puff]

Title: (Not) A Beautiful Mess
Fandom: D.Gray-Man
Characters: Kanda, Lavi, Allen-Neah, Lenalee (Somewhat OT4-ish)
Rating: G
Word Count: 998
Day/Theme: 7/Books
Summary: Lavi claims himself Bookman, Allen alternates between himself and Neah, Kanda presses Mugen against Allen’s neck when he does that, and Lenalee doesn’t like any of these.
A/N: The

Comments

[isumi_ilde]

GOOD. GOOD, LENALEE IS BEING SENSIBLE. BOW TO HER BOYS. :|

This.... hurts, in a good way, but it's painful to read through I guess. Since I haven't been reading DGM anymore, I've now idea which info in this is canon and which one is your theory, but I thin it could slot very neatly into the canon I remembered. I should probably pick it up again, but the long hiatus uuuuugggghh

I love the way you write their dynamic a lot? How they're desperate for some familiarity in the midst of suspicions and feeling the others are strangers. And the indistinguishable line between Neah and Allen is my absolute favorite! Also Lavi's laugh in the end. ;A;

[nherizu]

Sigh. Emang ya lavi itu kan bukan 'lavi' and by the time he becomes 'bookman', he'll be 'bookman' and not 'lavi' because 'lavi' isn't even a real person! *rant mode activated*
Entry yg ini dalem bo, cuman paling berantakan so far dr yg udah gw baca. Get a beta and post it on ffn coz this is awesome (tho gw menangkap yullen lebih banyak di sini =)) )

[a1y_puff]

Hahah thanks bok XD

Entry yang ini memang pengen gw expand dikit, nambahin a little bit of details or background yang gak muat dalam 1000 words. Kalo udah mo gw post di ffn and AO3 hehehe

as for Yullen, can ya blame meh? settingan default gw Yullen sih ahhahaha