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[OriFic] The Dream House

Jun 22, 2014 01:10

Title: The Dream House
Rating: G
Word Count: 992
Day/Theme: 4/Want
Summary: "You know what my dream house is like? A house made of wood, surrounded by greeneries and nature. It doesn’t even have to be big, but it would be nice if it has a lot of windows."
A/N: Fourth submission of the 10 days challenge. Certainly not set in the modern world. I'm ( Read more... )

challenge, orific

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a1y_puff June 26 2014, 08:36:30 UTC

Hahaha I'm not sorry? :'D

dark_kana June 27 2014, 15:27:49 UTC

Oh...
Beautifully written. I have tears in my eyes... :-(

isumi_ilde July 4 2014, 05:11:50 UTC

Oh wow, this is really nice. The description flows really well, the atmosphere is perfect, this might be my favorite so far. <3 Ketebak sih kalo Arianya mati, but it makes it even more bittersweet, I think?

The proposal scene was adorable uwuuuuuu

nherizu July 6 2014, 05:03:34 UTC

I knew it! From the beginning I've guessed he must be building a house for his dead friend. Lol, I kinda know you and your writing already? XD
But it was nice indeed. ;)