[Fic - Kanda/Allen] What Goes Unsaid (Doesn't Always Go Unnoticed)

[a1y_puff]

Title: What Goes Unsaid (Doesn't Always Go Unnoticed)
Author: a1y-puff
Fandom: D. Gray-Man
Characters: Kanda/Allen, side Lavi/Lenalee
Summary: When Allen agreed to a short trip to the mountains for their summer vacation, he absolutely didn’t expect to have this not-so-little problem. Or solving said problem with Kanda, for that matter. Curse the thin walls

Comments

[jamie310]

I loved this story. I say keep writing this way it's really good*<>*

[a1y_puff]

Sorry for the late reply! Anyway I'm glad you enjoyed this story, thank you so much ♥

[hakasha]

oooooooh, that was hot. XD and I swear I blushed in embarrassment for Lavi and Lenalee, even when I kept telling myself they were probably doing it on purpose... which I then found out they were, thankfully, or my embarrassed-for-the-characters'-sake-meter would have exploded. XD

but yeah, hot. and still fluffy! I very much approve of more fic in this vein. =)

[a1y_puff]

LoL eveb I had to cut some things down due to the awkwardness when I wrote it >.>;;; but bahaha yay for getting embarrassed for the sake of the characters? =))

And thanks! Glad you approved ♥

[king_autumn13]

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THAT WAS FLIPPING AWESOME!!! HELLZ YEAH YOU SHOULD WRITE MORE LIKE THIS!!! THAT WAS..WAS SIMPLY... HOT!! LOLZ I DROOLED... yes, write more lemon. but i do like your innocent ones too. their all good!!!

[a1y_puff]

heee~ thanks so much ♥ and glad you enjoyed this :D

[king_autumn13]

"enjoyed" it? it goes beyond just enjoying it.... your really good at writing... no lie. ^_^ your stuff always makes me happy. I WUVZ IT ALL!! <3

[ryuujidiceboy]

Oh, lovely and hot~! It loved how you did the part awkward parts at the beginning. It can be so hard writing those sometimes. Also, yay Kanda can use his brainXP. As for the innocent vs this. I can't choose I lie bothXD! I'm always happy to see you update~!

[a1y_puff]

Eheheh thanks! God I felt awkward writing that too but then it's fun writing them getting all awkward >3
and yes Kanda's brain isn't there for nothing, yey XD.

Hehe thanks! I'll uhh.. try to will myself to write more XD;

[nherizu]

The b'day girl finally comes~!

............I'm speechless xD
This is my first time reading something like this from you (putting aside those RPs :p) so I'm kinda uhm, .. surprised xD
Ok, sooo me likey xD
At first I was like 'HAHWHATTHEHELLWERETHOSETWODOINGOHNOTHEYDIDNT' to Lavilena's err moans? And it took me a while to calm my mind, it almost broka my brain (in a good way) xD
Then, then, came Allen's adorable reactions, and Kanda's dorky replies =))

I loved the scene when Allen and Kanda rushed towards the bathroom, it was so LOL. Then, then, Allen's great suggestion WINS xD

And the ending, I love the ending xDD
It's adorable, but still in their dorky way ;))

And, there are many lines that, if I were the one who wrote it, I wold totally use the same lines! (meaning, this fic is sooo asdfghjkl). And, and your style, I noticed you changed your style a bit. It's become more vague and full of descriptions, compared to your other fics ;)

And so, so... yeah, me goes to FFn to fave this nao xD

[a1y_puff]

Yay late b'day girl is late XDD *shot*

pfft. Sorry to break your brain (or actually, no, I'm not sorry XD)

butbut yeah as I said I was surprised you actually liked this XD;;

the idea od themrushing to the bathroom was too dorky to pass up and I couldn't helop myself XD

And thanks, TBH the ending was a bitch to write, so glad you like :D

and annnd ooh, which sentences for example? :3 *curious*
About the style, haha maybe? Even if I didn't mean to change my style or anything XD;; (hgalf of it was written in oine go XD; ) but ehh I guess it's a nice change? :'D

And thanks for the fave <3