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fic: to keep on breathing for

Jul 11, 2008 15:14

Title: to keep on breathing for
Rating: PG, I am so boring
Spoilers: Journey's End
Characters & Pairings: Rose/Ten, Donna, Martha, Sarah Jane
Summary: Popping into existence only to be stranded in a parallel world on an alien planet is, well, odd.
Excerpt: For a long while he feels just slightly out of synch, like there’s a beat missing from the ( Read more... )

martha jones, fic, the doctor, doctor who, one-shot, ten/rose, donna noble, rose tyler

Comments 32

dianaprallon July 12 2008, 01:10:29 UTC

*is destroyed*

_thirty2flavors July 13 2008, 00:55:32 UTC

I am goign to take that as a compliment and say thank you!

dianaprallon July 13 2008, 21:04:58 UTC

It was a compliment! It's just that... It's so sad.

_thirty2flavors July 13 2008, 22:48:24 UTC

It's funny, I never really thought of it as particularly sad until everyone reviewing was like "omg that was so sad!" lol

But thanks!

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_thirty2flavors July 13 2008, 01:00:28 UTC

I am insanely glad too! I missed it. Hurrah for ridiculously fic-happy, inspirational season finales?

Hahaha, I know! But I'm begining to think I've done everything I can possibly do with JKR's characters... whic his a very strange thought, actually.

snowfire July 12 2008, 22:38:20 UTC

Oh, this is gorgeous. And the last section killed me!

_thirty2flavors July 13 2008, 00:59:35 UTC

Thanks!

Your icon is so adorable.

sagacious_c July 14 2008, 03:36:04 UTC

I miss Donna, too. :(

I love the ending, how the Doctor and Rose have some of their old rapport. Very cute!

_thirty2flavors July 14 2008, 04:43:40 UTC

I love Donna! She went from irritating me somewhat to basically being my hero in thirteen episodes, that's quite an accomplishment. D: DONNAAAA. Plus I thought her relationship with the Doctor was absolutely adorable. BFFs! lol

Thanks! I wanted the last scene to lighten it quite a bit.

redreh_esila July 14 2008, 04:13:45 UTC

This is so brilliant I haven't got words. Sweet, tragic, and moving.

I love hearing his perspective on this new life.
I'd love to hear Rose's... you know... if you wanna... write some more... *wink wink.*

_thirty2flavors July 14 2008, 05:27:11 UTC

Thank you!

Rose's voice, hm? I'm sure I'll write something like that eventually, lol, I'm new to writing for this fandom so I'm still testing the waters and getting used to writing for each character. Initially I had imagined this fic that would hop back and forth between their perspectives, but then this one turned out to be 100% Doctor, so... who knows. =)