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Fandom - "Battlestar Galactica"

Dec 09, 2005 21:08

Title: 'Being True'
Author: mands_angelfox
Rating: PG
Genre : General/Romance
Pairing: Lee/Dualla
Word Count: 1,784
Feedback: Constructive criticism is appreciated
Spoilers: Some for Season 2
Author's Notes: I took the moment from when Lee/Dee were on that mat and added a few touches of my own not to mention some AU history to add some interesting events for ( Read more... )

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Comments 10

maiel_alcinoe December 9 2005, 21:12:30 UTC

Thankies for writing and sharing it!

_rebirthflame_ December 12 2005, 01:33:34 UTC

Very welcome.

I may not be a Lee/Dee shipper but don't mind writing fics for people who are ;-)

hetairai December 9 2005, 22:35:25 UTC

Ooooh! I loves! Esp the shower kiss :)

I'm sure the folks @ north__star (I hope I did that right) would appreciate the read.

Thanks for sharing.

_rebirthflame_ December 12 2005, 01:34:06 UTC

Thank you, so glad you enjoyed!

musing_mia December 10 2005, 02:08:03 UTC

Lovely! Oh, how I hope we get something like this. :bg:

_rebirthflame_ December 12 2005, 01:34:39 UTC

Hehe, glad you enjoyed :)

Glad my first Lee/Dee fic was a success.

alliiya December 10 2005, 06:33:50 UTC

Wonderful! Going from the first person to the narrative. I love it :)

_rebirthflame_ December 12 2005, 01:35:07 UTC

Thank you sweetheart :)

gene_lee December 11 2005, 23:10:51 UTC

What really strikes me about this piece, is the opening paragraph where she nararrates: ..."He's no longer just the CAG, he's no longer the Captain, he's Lee Adama..."

That is a very poignant distinction to make, since it holds such relevance to the character of Lee himself. In KLG, he uses that definition as a shield, a determination factor of who he is to someone, and a means to supress other desires and emotions that fall out of what is professional.

I love how Dee can admit that to herself, feel shaken by it, and eventually embrace it.

_rebirthflame_ December 12 2005, 01:37:02 UTC

Thank you for the constructive feedback, I really appreciate it.

I've always seen Lee as using his rank and his position to keep people at bay and to keep himself uninvolved and disconnected in some way. As you said, helps him to supress desires and emotions. I'm glad that I'm not the only person who sees him that way.

Again, thank you for the feedback. It's very appreciated :)