Comments | _quaintnotion: Oh, heyyy

someiiyoshino in _quaintnotion

Oh, heyyy

Nov 25, 2011 23:55

Alright!

Thank you for the feedback on my last post. I'm glad the proposal received positive responses, despite the rather small turn out. If you haven't replied but are intrigued nonetheless, I encourage you to join~ :D

And with that, I officially declare the start of:

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!mod post, whateverfest

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kotsurin November 25 2011, 15:57:51 UTC

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bellcheria November 25 2011, 18:47:26 UTC

QAQ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

colberry November 25 2011, 19:52:49 UTC

He wants to walk over, kneel upon the floor and wrap his arms around Ruki’s narrow waist. He wants to bury his head into his stomach and whisper words that he doesn’t know how to say into his shirt.

But he stays where he is, chest starting to crack open and spill scarlet onto the smudged tiles.

Ruki pays no mind to Reita's crimson-slathered heart. Instead, he buries his hands into his hair and tugs hard. His eyes are shutting, letting the world snap to black and swallow him. Fingers are tangling, suffocating into purple around the blond-to-brown strands and maybe for the first time since adolescence, Ruki is broken.

And Reita can’t stand it, “Please, I - ”

A disemboweled growl cuts him off. He sees Ruki clench his jaw tight, teeth bared and lip curled back. But he also sees the tears shining in the fluorescent lights, sliding down his cheeks and plunging from his jaw.

And this time he follows instinct - walking over and touchingTouching this beautiful, broken mess that’s full of glitter, skulls and black ribbons. ( ... )

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wakaremichi November 25 2011, 16:04:38 UTC

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bellcheria November 25 2011, 18:58:11 UTC

Feet bare off socks patted of towards the curtains, opening them to reveal snow and coldness. The shivering breath came out and hit the window. Holding his elbows, making himself small he went over to the heater, putting it on a high level. Yeah he could enjoy that, tea and some other hot stuff when he returned ( ... )

shadow_fictions November 25 2011, 20:30:30 UTC

Oh this warmed my heart and made me smile something silly.
No really. Getting odd looks from people because I look stupid with this grin.

but this is so ridiculously cute.

bellcheria November 25 2011, 20:48:31 UTC

snjahdksaj ;A; thanks so much~
Fufufuu I know how that feeling is x3 *hugs*
snhjadksa thanks again <3 glad you liked it .w.

wakaremichi November 25 2011, 16:07:07 UTC

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crucifyregret November 25 2011, 18:19:56 UTC

His eyes were burning and his chest was on fire and every damn cliche you could think of was lost to the flame inside the blond's chest as he sucked down the nicotine like a kid sucking on his mother's tit. That was the last time. He kept on telling himself that every goddamn time, but somehow that little asshole would just keep winding his way back into his heart with a few words or a few tears. The effort was so minimal... it didn't take much to keep him happy, and Takanori fucking knew that. To live with him could be the easiest thing he'd ever done if he really tried ( ... )

all in good time lovetug November 25 2011, 20:39:30 UTC

The clock ticks on the wall, it seems unnaturally loud as it reverberates in the stony silence. People say silence can be deafening, but I say that’s bullshit. It is silence like this that allows you to hear everything you wouldn’t hear otherwise. If anything, sound echoes and leaves a greater impression ( ... )

Re: all in good time alteregosadist November 25 2011, 23:15:02 UTC

Oh hey look, a title.

I just love the way you write. Your style is simplistic, but it draws out so many emotions. It's not elegant or crammed with descriptive metaphors and other pretty words. The words are weighted, realistic. I felt something (it could be my heart) sinking into my stomach reading this. Like I knew this happened, knew that the loss is true, but reading this reaffirmed it and gave it extra meaning. Apologies for rambling and wasting your time, but I don't really know how to explain how I feel.

People say silence can be deafening, but I say that’s bullshit. It is silence like this that allows you to hear everything you wouldn’t hear otherwise. If anything, sound echoes and leaves a greater impression. This just rings with truth. I often experience this effect with silence. That's why I hate it.

I hate the old and happy. They understand loss but they refuse to understand my bitterness. For once I get why youth could ever be intensely jealous of age. The old and happy smile when they remember the sad times of their ( ... )

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kotsurin November 25 2011, 16:07:39 UTC

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lovetug November 25 2011, 16:09:58 UTC

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shadow_fictions November 25 2011, 18:03:15 UTC

"Ruki you should stop."

The man in question folded his arms across his chest, cigarette snug between two fingers, the doctors words still ringing in his head and the soreness of his throat an indication that maybe, just maybe, he was wrong.

"It's taking your voice away."

Ruki narrowed his eyes, fuming. He could still sing, thank you very much, still growl and scream with the intensity he did way back when. Still perform. "Fuck you, Reita." he growled, and stalked off.

Reita sighed and scooped up the near full pack of 'innocent looking sticks of death' (as Kai had called them once), before tossing both the carton and lighter in the nearest bin.

It would be better in the long run.

Even if his ass would be paying for it. (Quite literally)

alteregosadist November 25 2011, 19:34:01 UTC

Ruki narrowed his eyes, fuming. He could still sing, thank you very much, still growl and scream with the intensity he did way back when. Still perform. "Fuck you, Reita." he growled, and stalked off.

The tension between Ruki and Reita is almost palpable. You did a good job keeping the mood with only a few words.

someiiyoshino November 25 2011, 18:48:57 UTC

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