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Comments

[scars_onmy_eyes]

I love this to bits. Very good chapter.

[_noisenkisses_]

...wow you replied fast.

[scars_onmy_eyes]

lol I was browsing through slashypunkboys when you posted.

[_noisenkisses_]

Ah okay cool. I was worrying everyone had forgotten about this story and I wouldn't get any comments.

[fadetoxblack]

Hi. I love this. So much.
I love the approach you've taken with this story and just how bitter Jesse is about everything instead of being all mopey, etc. It's interesting and you've dealt with the situation very maturely and brilliantly. Awww, John. You make me love John more than I already do and that's hard. The characterization is wonderful, really because each of them are different and you can really see that.

...I also love how Jesse's being evil with those certain people. Cough. But then again, I'm mean. >.<

Good job! I hope you continue.

[savannahlee]

This is one of the most interesting stroies I've read in a while!

[elleheartsyou]

i love love love this. i really do. i love that it's so multidimentional. and that you hate different people at different times and at the same time you really love them. and the characterization is awesome. and i like john and jesse's friendship and everything.

[anchorline]

I missed this.

Is it mean for me to be amused that he's probably just infected Pierre and one of the twins? Because it does. Because they make terrible music.