Title: Lead Me (not) into Temptation
Author: Kagome
Series: Black Butler
Prompt: #87: Passion
Word Count: 2,145
Rating: NC-17
Characters, Pairings: Sebastian/Ciel
Summary: Today, it is Sebastian who is oh-so-boldly crossing that thin (nearly imperceptible) line, with a smile and a chuckle and a voice filled with dark promise-not to
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Excellent job, love! The extended metaphor of hunger and snacking was brilliantly executed-- I was especially tickled by Sebastian's statement about morning-after stomachaches, haha. But my giggles quickly turned into shivers of delight with the line "We must slake our hunger a little at a time, and we must savor each morsel that we are given. I guarantee you, my Lord-the crumbs that you offer me are indeed relished.” UNF. This fangirly sentiment also applied to the omipresent/onipotent bit, as well as Sebastian not doing anything in "God's name." GORGEOUS. Chilling, sexy, and gorgeous.
I can't wait to see more~ :D
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Thank you very much; Sebastian, I've discovered, can completely dominate a scene--it can be utterly laughable one moment and then toe-curling the next. He's good at that.
*blush* I was hoping someone would point out the "in God's name" part. I loved writing it.
There shall be more soon! <33333
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Your icon made me laugh so hard.
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