And Every Castle Built of Sand Will Crumble - KH 358/2 Days, Axel/Roxas, Xion

[_newworld]

Title: And Every Castle Built of Sand will Crumble
Author: Kagome
Prompt: 1sentence Themes: Set Three-Gamma
Warnings: language, angst, mild sexual content (tilt your head and squint), Days SPOILERS.
Rating: PG-13
Characters/Pairings: Axel/Roxas, Xion.
Disclaimer: Standard disclaimer applies.
Summary: It’s all just a cover, because he knows that

Comments

[bubblegumtotchi]

Ionno why, but I really like these little one-sentence thingies. ^^;I think the "hope" one just might be my fave of this batch. <3333333333

[kagome_angel]

I like doing them--they're fun. ^_^

I think I like 'Fall' and 'Farewells' best.

*hugs* Thank you for reading, as always. <33333333

[pig_catapult]

I really like how you included Xion in this. :) She was an important part of their (non?)lives, even if they don't remember her anymore.

[kagome_angel]

ICON LOVE HELLO KURAMA. XD

I had to include her~. They didn't remember her after she was gone, but while she was with them, she was important to both of them.

Thank you for reading and commenting!

[chocobo_cloud]

This piece is so, so lovely ^ ^

You have, honestly, made me like Xion. I really like how you portrayed her in your writings, and the overall mood is great c: Even the angst just had a certain feel to it that fit perfectly, but wasn't too heavy c: Great job!

[kagome_angel]

Thank you so much! :)

I tried to hate her, to be honest. I really, really did. I figured I'd hate her from what I'd seen of the game before it came out. I figured she'd get in the way of the AkuRoku-ness and that she'd be a nuisance. But I fell in love with her from the start. Hee.

I'm glad the angst wasn't too heavy. I tried to find a balance even though Days is really a sad game. ^______^

[chocobo_cloud]

Heh heh, I'm guilty there as well ^ ^;;; All my friends were like, 'Blah, Xion's just a dumb Mary Sue, blah'. And I just went along with it for a while, thinking that she was just going to be the third wheel in Roxas and Axel's relationship but... > w > She won me over from the beginning~♥♥♥ Hehe.

It's really hard to hate her when she looks almost exactly like me too XD *dies*

[hamano_ayumi]

Holy jesus you have just broken my freakin' heart (since I have one) in a million pieces this is AMAZING.

I just...can't even. aldfjaskjfas

I FINISHED THE GAME FIVE MINUTES AGO AND WANTED FIC AND I FOUND THIS AND NOW I AM SATISFIED. ;_;

It's happy and sad (oh god it's so sad but isn't it all?) and heart warming and chilling at the same time. You did a fantastic job and I adored every one of the fifty. (I can't even decide my favourite because I think they all are) And the balance between the three is...totally perfect. Because I think for a Days fic you need Xion to make the AkuRoku, it's necessary for it. And now when I'll replay KHII I'll feel totally empty 'cause Xion won't be there. D,:

Ironic too, because I figured I'd really, really hate Xion, I think everyone did. And then she just...won my respect over before I knew it and then the end happened and suddenly I'm sobbing internally. D,: I love heeeer.Anyway, my long, fangirlish comments aside, good KH fics that are perfectly arranged are hard to come by and this is certainly

[kagome_angel]

*blush* Thank you so much! ^_______^ I finished the game about a month ago (?) I think and I wanted to do something for these three. I love AkuRoku, I do, but... oh, Xion! ;_______________;

I totally figured I'd hate her. I thought she'd be a Mary Sue and get in the way but it wasn't like that at all. She was a strong, AMAZING, wonderful character and I MISSSS HEEEEEERRRRR OMG.

*blushes even more* I most definitely will. Thank you so much!

Also, I posted this over at kh_drabble, but it's here at this journal too (I never crossposted it anywhere):

http://users.livejournal.com/_newworld/62649.html#cutid1

[roterhimmel]

I know I commented before but I just read it again. dsahgdsaafsdahgdsfhjfdsjgdsfjgkkdsf, truly. Christ.

[_newworld]

Thank you, hon. ^___________^ <333