Make-Believe is for Children (Most of the Time) - Non-JRock, Tokio Hotel, Tom/Bill

Jun 07, 2009 23:52

Title: Make-Believe is for Children (Most of the Time)
Author: Kagome
Prompt: #44 - Pretend
Warnings: Twincest, hints of angst, schmoopiness.
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairings: Tom/Bill
Disclaimer: Standard disclaimer applies.
Summary: But Bill tries for Tom, because sometimes Tom has moments of weakness in which he simply can’t pretend ( Read more... )

tokio hotel, 100 prompts, billxtom, tomxbill

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strssna June 8 2009, 04:24:17 UTC
This was very, very lovely. My heart breaks for thinking how hard all that must've been, how scared they were... but they have each other, and that's all that matters. Your words showed all the emotions so beautifully <3

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kagome_angel June 8 2009, 17:17:58 UTC
Thank you so much! ^_^ I'm glad you like it and that the emotions shone through--that's what I wanted to do with this~.

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lady_blue_peach June 8 2009, 04:28:02 UTC
Fluffy...yet sadisfying

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kagome_angel June 8 2009, 17:18:36 UTC
Fluff is always satisfying! :D

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kagome_angel June 8 2009, 17:19:53 UTC
I can't help it! XD But at least the sap comes through in the end!

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jellypencil June 8 2009, 04:36:08 UTC
You write the most wonderful sap, please never stop! *_*

Bill promising Tom that he's okay when he's really not was so hurty. I thought the inclusion of the boys pretending that Jorg wasn't really gone as children was particularly striking. Tom telling Bill it's going to be okay when Bill can't -- even in the worst of situations they really do make a good pair, together.

So sweet. ♥ ♥

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kagome_angel June 8 2009, 17:22:00 UTC
*blush* Thank you so much! I promise to never stop~. NEVAR! *warrior cry*

*coughs*

I thought the inclusion of the boys pretending that Jorg wasn't really gone as children was particularly striking.

I am so relieved someone noticed that! Thank you, thank you, thank you! While I was writing, I actually thought this was the thing that stood out the most.

I agree--they make such a great pair. ^_^

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mrs_e_cat June 8 2009, 05:14:03 UTC
Loved the sap <3 Will never get sick of sap.
Wonderful, thankyou =)

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kagome_angel June 8 2009, 17:22:52 UTC
Sap is good for you! ^_^

Aww, thank you so much. <333

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